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[GRADED] [R] Advantage, Vignette, Stand-alone, Finished

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Que_S3ra_s3ra	Posted: May 29 2009, 04:14 AM
Wanderer Group: Members Posts: 25 Member No.: 9 Joined: 13-April 09	Link Summary: A Beating to Remember

Kade	Posted: May 31 2009, 01:45 PM
Head of On The Precipice Group: Admin Posts: 62 Member No.: 2 Joined: 9-April 09	The Teacher really beat the hell out of Frederick this time around. Though, it makes as sense as to why he did so. He assumed Frederick was aware of such advantages and yet he was not. It was a punishment for being ignorant. Your Originality and Creativity are somewhat there. It's rare to see one abandon a weapon under the guise of being blind to the advantages of having it. The Plot is seemingly slow but I have no complaints in this area. It's certainly moving and getting more and more interesting by the piece. Mechanics. As per usual I spotted no errors in this area. ~~ Frederick Blue, Rogue Shinigami* Earned EXP: 46 Total Bank Experience: 356 Tairyoku: E Reiatsu: E Sentou: E (25) Western Swords Eastern Swords Bare-handed Hohou: E (25) Kidou: E Enishi: E

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