Pokemon Taijitu. Is the Storyline good?, My idea for my hack. Do you like it?

[EvanMiesterX]

Well, since there isn't really anywhere else to put this (I think there should be ), I'm going to post my idea of the hack I'm going to be starting really soon, in fact, by the time you're reading this, I;ve probably already started, but not posted it in the Display subforum. Anyways, here is the storyline:

You are a ten year old kid that lives in the Jiino Region. It is your tenth birthday, so that means you must recieve your first pokemon. *insert normal pokemon storyline here, you know, badges, Elite Four, yadda yadda yadda...* While on your journey, you meet a team called Team Chaos. They are planning to send the world into eternal darkness by capturing Yinnagon (haha, made that name from "Yin". It is either a Light/Fire type (if I can add types) or a Fire/Flying type) That means that only Yangion will be left (which, like Yang, represents darkness, etc.) which would, therefore, make only night, and no day. In fact, they succeed. You get tangled up with Team Chaos, and your only hope of defeating them is by capturing Yangion and... (I don't want to give away every detail, do I?)

Well, I want to know what other members think of this. Do you like it? If there is anything you think should be changed, then feel free to tell me!

[Hiidoran]

I definetly like this story, in fact it actually sounds like a real Pokemon game thought up by Gamefreak themselves! It seems like you put a lot of thought into this one, good luck and I hope you have fun making it!

[Spenceroone3]

The bit about the teams sounds very close to what I was dreaming about when I was littler. It had to teams, Team Dawn and Team Dusk, trying to steal the Pokemon 'Dray' to make the world always night/morning.

But like Hiido said, it sounds like the sort of thing that Gamefreak would make. Use it

[EvanMiesterX]

Thanks guys! I never thought that it was really that good, but other people are going to be the ones playing it so, yeah, I'll use it!