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Flip The Switch, I suck at this.....
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The Plan With A Man

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3, 3, 2, 2. Three small washers, three small nuts, two large nuts, two large washers. Put them in the small envelope, fold it, put it in the electric stapler, than put it in the box. This is what Stephen had to do all day, every day. Just this same repetitive task. He yawned and turned to face the wall to his left......
Suddenly, the wall was made of rock and the room became incredibly hot. He looked back to his work and sighed. He picked up three small pieces of bone, three small bits of bloody , two large bits of bloody meat, and two large pieces of bone. He put the into a small flesh bag, folded it, stuck it inside the mouth of a bat, it bit down on the bag, than he put it in the big skull with the other flesh bags. Rinse and repeat. After a few minutes, He heard a screeching voice behind him. "ARE YOU OK STEPHEN!?!" This caused him to drop a few bits on the floor. He turned to face the she demon. "I'm fine ma'am, just a little hot." "Alright, just pick up those pieces and get some water." He watched his supervisor, a kind old lady, walk away. He bent down and picked up a couple of large nuts and washers. He then picked up a small piece of bone. "Damn" he muttered, putting it into his pocket, "Why don't the small bones change back after being dropped?"
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Non-mainstream French-Croatian Squid

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And then his daydream WAS ACTUALLY REAL MAYBE.
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| QUOTE (xolta @ Jul 10 2010, 10:03 PM) | | Ebe is the voice of reason, listen to ebe! |
| QUOTE (Murdercide626 @ Oct 31 2012, 10:57 AM) | Wow. Way to crush my dreams, Ebe.  |
| QUOTE (Nix @ Nov 24 2012, 02:02 AM) | And you know nothing of what I've done outside the forum.
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The Plan With A Man

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| QUOTE (Ebe @ Sep 22 2012, 02:12 AM) | | And then his daydream WAS ACTUALLY REAL MAYBE. |
better than a lot of other stories out there.
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The Plan With A Man

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| QUOTE (Spivsy @ Sep 22 2012, 04:45 PM) | | I don't get it |
This story is based on two things: One, I've had to do this job before, and it is a lot less exciting than sounds. Second, when I was in marching band in high school, I knew this one guy who talked about how he could just sit there and look at something, and all of a sudden it would become twisted in his mind. For example, He imagined a gigantic spider crawling out of a soda machine. So, that's what happens in the story. The character is bored, than everything becomes hellish in his mind. At the end, everything is normal again, but he then picks up a small bone, hinting that this may be more than his imagination.
That help?
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Nameless Spawn

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| QUOTE (Vortan @ Sep 22 2012, 05:04 PM) | This story is based on two things: One, I've had to do this job before, and it is a lot less exciting than sounds. Second, when I was in marching band in high school, I knew this one guy who talked about how he could just sit there and look at something, and all of a sudden it would become twisted in his mind. For example, He imagined a gigantic spider crawling out of a soda machine. So, that's what happens in the story. The character is bored, than everything becomes hellish in his mind. At the end, everything is normal again, but he then picks up a small bone, hinting that this may be more than his imagination.
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ah, I figured it was something like that
I rather liked this story actually
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The Plan With A Man

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| QUOTE (Hedgehodge Monster @ Sep 23 2012, 10:53 AM) | ah, I figured it was something like that
I rather liked this story actually |
Thanks
I originally wanted to make this longer, about how this happens over and over in different situations, but it worked better short, I think.
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The Plan With A Man

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I decided to do an even more horrifying version.
3, 3, 2, 2. Three small washers, three small nuts, two large nuts, two large washers. Put them in the small envelope, fold it, put it in the electric stapler, than put it in the box. This is what Stephen had to do all day, every day. Just this same repetitive task. He yawned and turned to face the wall to his left......
All of a sudden, he was in a night club surrounded by unattractive girls making duck faces. He clawed his eyes out in sheer horror.
THE END
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Quivering Blob

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| QUOTE (Vortan @ Oct 4 2012, 12:17 AM) | I decided to do an even more horrifying version.
3, 3, 2, 2. Three small washers, three small nuts, two large nuts, two large washers. Put them in the small envelope, fold it, put it in the electric stapler, than put it in the box. This is what Stephen had to do all day, every day. Just this same repetitive task. He yawned and turned to face the wall to his left......
All of a sudden, he was in a night club surrounded by unattractive girls making duck faces. He clawed his eyes out in sheer horror.
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"I CAN STILL SEE!" Please somebody get the reference
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Oozing Larva

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| QUOTE (Pyro-Gibberish @ Oct 4 2012, 01:20 AM) | | QUOTE (Vortan @ Oct 4 2012, 12:17 AM) | I decided to do an even more horrifying version.
3, 3, 2, 2. Three small washers, three small nuts, two large nuts, two large washers. Put them in the small envelope, fold it, put it in the electric stapler, than put it in the box. This is what Stephen had to do all day, every day. Just this same repetitive task. He yawned and turned to face the wall to his left......
All of a sudden, he was in a night club surrounded by unattractive girls making duck faces. He clawed his eyes out in sheer horror.
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"I CAN STILL SEE!" Please somebody get the reference
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hahaha lol thats sad
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40 different eyes that blink at random

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| QUOTE | I decided to do an even more horrifying version.
3, 3, 2, 2. Three small washers, three small nuts, two large nuts, two large washers. Put them in the small envelope, fold it, put it in the electric stapler, than put it in the box. This is what Stephen had to do all day, every day. Just this same repetitive task. He yawned and turned to face the wall to his left......
All of a sudden, he was in a night club surrounded by unattractive girls making duck faces. He clawed his eyes out in sheer horror.
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That was just too much horror to grasp, pure cruelty.
In the first one, maybe the one he imagines is the first not the second...
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