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Yes, Jolonah, there is a hell, Not really a creepypasta

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scythemantis

Posted: Jun 2 2011, 10:04 PM

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So there's this big collaborative online fiction thing called Orion's arm, which I've only ever read a single story from because this particular story seems to be more popular than the rest of the continuity put together. Possibly because it's about an actual physical hell in outer space that is also a giant living creature called the Queen of Pain which used to be an abused housecat mutated by nanotechnology. It's awkwardly written by what is obviously a furry and includes little gems like this:

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She grew noses and anuses all over his body so that he would sniff nothing but his own bloody diarrhea.

Read it here!

Now... would the Queen of Pain or the Dogscape win a fight?!

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Scythe is such a fucking aardvark

-The NY Times

Admiral_Aorta	Posted: Jun 2 2011, 10:43 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cc5wkQm6B44 Group: Elder Things Posts: 1,897 Member No.: 4 Joined: 7-April 09	I just skimmed over it but despite the awkward writing, it manages to be very disturbing and creepy. Those people who have been turned into nerve ending creatures that are in constant pain remind me of I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream. Also, Dogscape and the Queen of Pain would totally have sex. -------------------- Bogleech is the cool place to hang out. You can find most of the cool people there. In Bogleech you can just chill and do whatever and totally relax. "Take it easy" is the Bogleech motto, for example, that's how laid back it is there. Show up if you want to have a good time. Another good reason to show up is if you want to hang out with friends.

cultistofvertigo	Posted: Jun 11 2011, 03:03 PM
Nameless Spawn Group: Members Posts: 228 Member No.: 364 Joined: 15-May 11	There's another one: http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-pag..._initiation_toc It's called Initiation, and I guess has that same furry-alien thing in it. After reading the Jolonah one, though, I'm... bleh. I mean it's cool and all, but seeing as how I can't help but compare this to dogscape, which I'm now in love with, it's kinda underwhelming for the first... half or so of the story. It picks up when they get to Bosch. I was poking around on their site, and I found a little wiki-esque thing that has an article on space whales. So that's neat, I suppose. In a fair fight, Queen of Pain wins, it's kind of engineered to be unbeatable. Like a... planet-sized amorphous toture organism version of a Mary Sue, if that makes any sense. Where do you even find these things? -------------------- xolta: "cultistofvertigo your are some kind of mad genuis" All Power Exchange Has To Be Negotiated! Don't say that Tianyulong didn't change everything, because TIANYULONG. CHANGED. EVERYTHING. [Boyd Rice quote] Can't is the cancer of happen. These things too, are all a part of Architeuthis's plan...

scythemantis

Posted: Jun 11 2011, 10:39 PM

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It's cute that if there's even the littlest bit of good in you, you're totally safe. You could probably build a little house and live on the queen of pain if you felt like it, and who wouldn't? Such a safe neighborhood it outlives the universe.

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Scythe is such a fucking aardvark

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Revereche	Posted: Jun 12 2011, 01:48 AM
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Jesus lizard	Posted: Jun 12 2011, 03:25 AM
Invader Swim Group: Elder Things Posts: 6,530 Member No.: 91 Joined: 30-June 09	Since I have an imagination and didn't want to settle for LOL CAT FURRIES DURRHURRYIFF I read through the first two parts of this and imagined the humanoid sapients as bipedal gorgonopsids with biomechanical grafts, who had engineered their species to genetic perfection, purity, and beauty. Probably will read the rest of it at some point in the future, but I'm not fond of it.

Revereche	Posted: Jun 13 2011, 02:10 AM
ハヒ〜♥ Group: Super Moderators Posts: 8,717 Member No.: 157 Joined: 11-January 10	Apparently by the same person who wrote the story: http://manyardbutler.deviantart.com/art/Ye...-Hell-185455047 -------------------- ペロペロペロ