Victor Stone, Codename: Sand Kid

[black_power_fist]

Character's Real Name: Victor Stone
Mutant Code Name: Sand Kid
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 128 lbs
Nationality: Afro-American; New York

Powers Description: Victor Stone is a mutant of the desert, meaning his abilities are based on the thing that we see the most in the desert: sand. Vic can manipulate sand from his surroundings. Vic is able to osmotically absorb liquids from any matter; this ability kills the living through dehydration and turns everything else brittle. He is further able to increase the density of his sand, creating various sharp weapons or claws of various sizes that can even split the earth below him. However, because he doesn't control fully the power to use and manipulate sand, he can only absorb 1 liter of water and can only create small weapons, such as a knife and shuriken. He is a great surfer, and with the sand, surfs in midair, using his sand as the "water".

Character Description: Victor Stone is your typical black man: brown skin, very short black hair, tall feature and very well sculptured. Most girls are attracted to him, but he doesn't fall easily in love. What he wears is different each day, but what he likes to put most of the time is a yellow short sleeved jacket, which he puts on a white sleeve-less shirt. He wears jeans and Uprise black and white sneekers. What makes him different from other black people is his light red eyes.

Background/History: Victor Stone, born Victor Alexander Stone, was once a normal kid of 12 years old. Until one day, he got kidnapped by men in black and was transported into an underground laboratory . There he was knocked unconscious, and place in a red liquid. They started their experiment, a being that would be able to control the sand around. However, as soon as they finished placing the special molecule that would give him the abilities of sand control, three of the X-Men (sorry for the god-modding), Zeus, Spectre and Whirlwind, irrupted in the laboratory and saved Victor. Zeus discharged the machines, Spectre broke open the glass in which Victor was retain and after Victor was secured, Whirlwind finished the job by breaking everything that was left.

The reason those men kidnapped Vic was that his father was friends with Xavier's School for the gifted and the X-hunters wanted to have revenge on the man. So they kidnapped Victor, gave him mutant powers and were going to bring him on their side, but the X-Men were able to counter their plans. Now he goes to Xavier's school for the gifted.

Personality: Even though he has strange powers, that never offended him, and he continued his life normally. He is an upbeat and cheerful teenager and though he may seem simple-minded and naïve at times, he possesses an unwavering heart and his strong sense of justice is extraordinary. At times, he is impulsive and quick to anger, but he is always sincere about what he says and does.

Weapon : None, but carries a snowboard to increase speed in battle.

Attacks:
Control Mutant II
Total Stat Points: 15
Min Stat Points: 3 per Section
HP Base: 200
MP Base: 200
Tech Limit: 10

Name of Tech: Sand Shuriken
Element of Tech: Earth (sand)
Level of Tech: 1
Description of Tech: Victor throws shuriken made from sand. Unlike regular shuriken, these are merely fast-moving balls of sand that cause blunt trauma, not actual wounds.
MP Cost: 5 (for 10 shuriken)
Damage: 2 per shuriken
Special Effects: None

Name of Tech: Sand Levitation
Element of Tech: Earth (Sand)
Level of Tech: (optional)
Description of Tech: Not really an attack, but a beneficial technique. With almost no effort, he is able to snowboard in midair using the sand that he controls, which increases his speed.
MP Cost: None
Damage: None
Special Effects: Thanks to this tech, his speed increases of +2 for the time he's on the snowboard (for exactly 4 posts)

Name of Tech: Sand Encampment Wall
Element of Tech: Earth (Sand)
Level of Tech:
Description of Tech: By Surrounding himself with dense sand, he creates a sand barrier to protect the user from any offensive attacks.
MP Cost: 35
Damage: None
Special Effects: Can take up 70 damage. Totally disintegrates if water is used to break the shield.

Name of Tech: Sand Capture Field
Element of Tech:
Level of Tech:
Description of Tech: By quickly controlling sand, he can use it to levitate objects, stop bullets of harming him and stop objects to crash (roughly from a bullet to a motorcycle). He can than put them down or throw them towards an enemy
MP Cost: 20
Damage: Between 10 and 25
Special Effects: None

Name of Tech: Drilling Sand Bullet
Element of Tech: Earth (sand)
Level of Tech:
Description of Tech: Creates a compressed ball of sand and shoots it at the direction of the target.
MP Cost: 40
Damage: 60
Special Effects:

Name of Tech: The Titan's Sand Fist
Element of Tech: Earth (sand)
Level of Tech: 1
Description of Tech: He can transform his fist into highly condensed sand and punches the opponent.
MP Cost: 15 for the beginning, 3 per posts to keep it
Damage: 20
Special Effects: None

Name of Tech: Sand Leg Sweeper
Element of Tech: Earth (sand)
Level of Tech: 1
Description of Tech: He transforms his whole leg into highly condensed sand and kicks the opponent.
MP Cost: 20 for the beginning, 5 per posts to keep it
Damage: 25
Special Effects: None

Defense: 5
Speed: 5
Skill: 5

Hit Points: 200
Mutant Power Level: 200
Mutant Character Level: Control Mutant II

[Zeus]

There are a few minor problems that I found with some of your techs, but other than that, it looks really good.

Tech Problems
Your Sand Encampment Wall should have a bit more drawback, like lower effectiveness on attacks. Some of your damages are outside AM Mutant power levels, but if you qualify for CMII, you'll be alright. Also, your sand-snowboarding tech to raise speed should probably have a turn limit on it to limit power on use.

Would you be willing to post an RP Sample and try for CMII?

[black_power_fist]

Made all the changes Zeus and sorry for taking such a LONG time to reply.

[Draiken]

You're still missing the RP sample, just to let you know.

[Zeus]

Agreed. However, Draiken, don't worry about it. I will take care of it.

Need an RP sample to round it out. Just a regular post you would have will suffice.