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Lax
Posted: Jun 18 2006, 05:50 PM


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ohh that would be nice wink.gif
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maze
Posted: Jun 27 2006, 08:32 AM


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I'm back and I love this story more updates please please please.
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Posted: Jun 28 2006, 09:25 PM


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Part 9 - Soz for the delay lol
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On The Road

Ben had picked up Liz at the house and, the pair of them were now in the car. Liz still was concentrating hard on her vision, she hadn’t thought of nothing else, and her and Ben hadn’t said two word to each other the whole journey to the dip, Liz wanted to check out the scene where I had been kidnapped to see if the vision was any clearly. It didn’t take them long to get there, and while Ben parked up the car Liz walked down to where she thought it had taken place.
She looked around to see if anything seem tampered with of any sign of struggle, there wasn’t much to go on, just from a patch of grass that seemed a little flatter than the rest . It looked a lot like a drag mark.
Ben walked over to Liz and bent down beside her.

“Got anything?” he asked touching her on the shoulder, Liz felt a tingle run down her spin, the feeling she got whenever Ben was in sight, and it was worse when he touched her. She stood up, and shook of Bens hand while she did so, and followed the trail of flattened grass, that disappeared behind a tree.
Behind the tree my jacket lay on the ground with a hug tear down the back, that looked like massive claws.
She lifted the jacket and, once again the vision flashed…. This time it went a little further, it was me, she saw that clear as day. But it was me in the middle of a barn, with one of the walls of the barn was painted green, that is all she could pick out, that was anyway unexpected. Although it had a smell that you didn’t expect in a barn, of just completely cleanliness, there was no smell from hay or animals, more like a disinfectant smell.

She returned from behind the tree and threw the jacket to Ben.

“Its hers alright.. And the bastards have cut her up!” she looked at Ben with rage.

“What?!?!” Ben asked in shock, he completely got the wrong end of what Liz had said.

“She is beaten up pretty bad.” she said looking at Ben with her usual DUH! Face. He shrugged his shoulder at her.

“Hold on. I’m going to phone King” Liz said to stop Ben, who had started to walk of back to the truck. She pulled her cell from her back pocket and looked up and rang Kings number and waited for his answer.

“You got her yet?” King answered in a panic not asking how Liz was.

“Nothing yet apart from her jacket torn up, although I got another scratch n sniff vision, with a lot more sniff this time, I don’t get it but maybe some of you guys might.”

“Fill me in then…” King answered

“Ok well, it’s a barn, green wall and a clean smell, no animal scent or hay scent, totally not barn issue smells” she replied

“What?…. Wait a min” the phone hung up and left Liz standing in the middle of a dark field with Ben. Liz looked completely confused, and she didn’t understand what had just happened.

“What?” Ben asked noticing how puzzled Liz was

“King? He just hung up” She walked a little closer to Ben, then realised what King was up to.

“OO that stupid fuck is going after her with out us, he knows the location!” Liz said grabbing Bens arms and began running back to the truck.

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Back at the base

King was walking around completely lost, not knowing what to think or do, all he knew was that I was missing with absolutely no idea of where I was or absolutely nowhere to start looking.
He walked into the lab where Kathy sat on the computer looking at some site for metallic substances, when his cell rang, He looked at the screen and noticed it was Liz calling.


“You got her yet?” King asked .

“Nothing yet apart from her jacket torn up, although I got another scratch n sniff vision, with a lot more sniff this time, I don’t get it but maybe some of you guys might.” Liz answered on the other end

“Fill me in then…”

“Ok well, it’s a barn, green wall and a clean smell, no animal scent or hay scent, totally not barn issue smells” she replied

“What?…. Wait a min” King hung up, and rushed over to the counter and picked up a clip of silver bullets, containing UV light, what he liked to call sun dogs. He tapped Kathy on the shoulder

“Sit tight I’m heading out” he left her and ran into his room, and came back out with his two pistols attached to his belt and his leather jacket on. He had done this all so fast that Kathy didn’t know what to say and just stared at him leaving the base.

“Ok, see you then” she mumbled to herself and carried on with what she was doing.

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Lax
Posted: Jun 29 2006, 08:01 AM


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peepwallA.gif Guns ..


Loved the update Xtina smile.gif
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