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 [Drama/Angst] After, WonTon - Chapter 7 FINALLY Posted [6-28]
Anrui
Posted: Mar 8 2008, 10:46 AM


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Tony is such a tease!

Jump his bones!
Rhith
Posted: Mar 8 2008, 01:00 PM


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Ahh! That was cute.
Can't wait for more!
JaeSeung
Posted: Mar 15 2008, 04:30 PM


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Sorry the next chapter is so slow in coming...I want to write a lemon, but it just isn't coming out (pun not intended).
Anrui
Posted: Mar 15 2008, 05:44 PM


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^ ha lol
Jae Seung
Posted: Jun 28 2008, 01:02 AM


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Its been months since I updated this (the chapter just wouldn't let me write it), so I guess a short chapter is better than nothing. =\



Chapter Seven

Tony closed his eyes and bit his lip as if he was trying to block out the sensation of Jae Won’s hot breath on his neck. Or maybe he was trying to focus on it entirely. The former magnae just smiled and continued what he had been doing.

Gently he tugged at Tony’s earring with his teeth. Instead of the outrageous hoops from years before, he wore a pair of tiny studs which had been a birthday gift from Woo Hyuk a few years previous. The matching necklace, though, had been a gift from Jae Won. A sliver of the chain was showing just beneath the two open buttons at the collar of his shirt. And Jae Won couldn’t resist hooking his finger around the chain and gently pulling on it until the charm rested outside of Tony’s shirt. Just seeing it made him smile.

As he began to pull his hand back Tony caught it and moved it to rest on his shoulder. Whether by mistake or not Jae Won’s thumb rested off of the fabric of the older man’s shirt and on the bare skin at his clavicle. It seemed a bit more natural this time as he leaned in to kiss Tony. Just a bit less frightening. Just a bit less life changing or earth shattering. And without hesitation Tony’s lips parted beneath his and their tongues entwined. It was a slow, deep kiss filled with a slow burning lust and a deep seated longing.

Years ago, just before the breakup of H.O.T, Jae Won had recognized his attraction to Tony. He never brought the subject up with anyone and, if he had ever been asked, would have lied through his teeth about it, but at least he was comfortable enough with his sexuality to write it off as a silly crush without much afterthought. Anyways, for some reason or another he always thought Tony was straight as an arrow, which, although he didn’t know, was something Tony would laugh at him for. Apparently he was too blind to notice that he and Woo Hyuk had been in an on-and-off relationship for five years, even when the three of them were sharing an apartment.

Gently Tony’s fingers stroked his cheek as his other hand found its way to Jae Won’s waist to pull him closer. It was an invitation that the younger man didn’t ignore, shifting his position so that he was sitting in Tony’s lap with his legs on either side of the other man’s thighs. His leg was crushed slightly against the arm of the couch, but he decided to ignore it in favor of the current situation.

Jae Won’s grip on Tony’s shoulder tightened slightly as his thumb traced along the partially exposed collar bone, a path soon to be followed by his lips. He enjoyed the way Tony’s arms wrapped themselves around his torso, one hand resting between his shoulder blades, the other curled around his waist. This is what he enjoyed the most about being with someone, not so much the acts of intimacy themselves, but carefully watching or feeling the way his partner reacted. Like the way that every time he bit grazed his teeth across Tony’s skin, no matter how lightly, Tony would dig his manicured fingernails into his back through the fabric of his t-shirt. Or the way that every time he laved the hollow at the base of Tony’s throat with his tongue his breath would hitch slightly and his eyes would flutter closed.

It was Tony who popped the first button on his own shirt. Jae Won, who was was too afraid of taking things a step too far, hadn’t tried to remove any of his friend’s clothing, but that first button was all he needed as encouragement to finish the job. As the material parted he trailed his fingers down Tony’s smooth chest and brought their mouths together for another kiss. Although part of him was anticipating it, Jae Won couldn’t prevent his quiet gasp as hands found their way under his shirt. Delicate hands which had done little more than small caresses before were suddenly forcefully gliding up his sides and raking fingernails down his back. Involuntarily he arched away from the almost vicious scratches which only served to press their chests together and for his hips to undulate in a delicious way. Tony repeated the process before pulling the grey t-shirt over Jae Won’s head.
Anrui
Posted: Jun 29 2008, 09:29 PM


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Oh man, it's been FOREVER~

That was really sexy. You are doing your lemon!
ShadowsNeverDie
Posted: Jun 30 2008, 02:36 PM


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I should've been reading this before, omg. This is really entertaining, and wow, the wait was probably worth it because that last chapter is....a really good read. :3 ><;
Jae Seung
Posted: Jun 30 2008, 07:27 PM


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I'm glad you guys enjoyed this =D It went through four complete rewrites before I posted this chapter. ^^; I'm already working on another chapter, so hopefully I'll get it up soon. And I mean get it up in every sense of the word.
ShadowsNeverDie
Posted: Jun 30 2008, 09:32 PM


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L-O-L. I'm glad I got that. ._.
kenni
Posted: Jul 7 2008, 02:08 PM


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naa~ I could finally read it as well >=D :sly:

|D;; well, actually I re-read the whole fic haha <3
great job~ its so cool you could work on it again! :glee: :bubble:
brownorange
Posted: Jul 19 2008, 09:17 PM


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Oh my god!!! This is crazy!!!

I have never thought about our favourite members being yaoi until I read this fic. The angry won and angel tony fall in loves with each other. Very unexpected. Haha!

So this is the last chapter? I am expecting more :)
SexySickness
Posted: Oct 13 2008, 03:01 PM


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*asks faintly*..erm...it's been months... are you going to finish this? You leftit off at a VERY bad spot!!!! *wants JaeWon to get a little*
Jae Seung
Posted: Oct 20 2008, 02:36 PM


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I want to finish it, but I have this tendency to freeze up whenever I'm trying to write smut so it hasn't gone much of anywhere. ; A; Maybe when I'm done with my website project I'll have time to force myself through another chapter.
Jae Seung
Posted: Oct 12 2009, 04:15 PM


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I'm working (slowly) on another chapter. I need to get it to 1500 words before I'll post it, though.


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