Title: Blues' Poetry
Description: Updated: March 24, 2006
Blues - November 17, 2005 11:32 PM (GMT)
I've started writing Poetry for 5 years now and well everyone like it so I want to see what all of you think. Some of it will make you go like this :blink: and others :shake: and maybe some like this :o . I'll only put one for now so here it is:
Shadowing Light
I believe in my future
farewell to the
shadow, it was
my placeto live, but now I
need your hand, lead
me out with your
light, I've
breathed in
the disgusting
air of darkness, I'll
never lose out, to
the pressure everything
is just like an
illusion, I'll be losing
you before long.
I knew you were
supporting me, I'm going
to be desperate, I never
lose my confidence
I knew you were there
supporting me...
The Shadow is returning...
+Bloodmyer+ - November 18, 2005 11:56 AM (GMT)
:D Cool peom me liked^^ dont make it too death and dieing and..scary!.o.o.............eep^^ it good, keep up da good work!^^
nav - November 20, 2005 02:46 PM (GMT)
me liked too :P awesome poem, keep up the good work... B)
Blues - November 22, 2005 02:53 AM (GMT)
Here's a New one I guess
The One
You're the one I cherish,
The one I hold
You're the one I've looked
Up to all my life
You're the one special
person who created me
You're the one creation
I've lived with forever
You're the one that
fed me when I was young
And now, you just can't
let me down.
Blues - February 12, 2006 02:32 AM (GMT)
My new poem is kinda hard to follow said some people the first time I told it to people which was i think 3 yrs. ago and I just dug it up out of my papers. Also if you want to see this same poem go to my
blog to also see it.
My Fairwell
not much to say but my life has been shot to hell from here on out
all that i have loved are gone
all that there is left to to is sulk in my pain
if only i could change the past to what is should be i would
please forgive me for what i am about to do
good bye to all that i have loved
Also this is my 1,000! post!!!! Hurray I made it to 1000! Blues - February 18, 2006 09:04 PM (GMT)
My newest work^^
My Prophecy
Everyday that goes by
I get another day older.
With each year that goes by
I get closer and closer to death.
Nothing can stop my prophecy
from ending.
If I must, I will kill for
my right to live.
You can not, will not stop me
from killing you
and forefilling
My Prophecy!
Uchiha Kaizer - February 18, 2006 09:05 PM (GMT)
dude your poetry is all kick a** work bro. keep it up! :D
Blues - February 20, 2006 06:42 AM (GMT)
Ok this one isn't the most brillent of all but, it's a Graphic one. I figured since the GFX's ones are more popular I would try one my self but please not it's not all that great.
Elisa - February 20, 2006 07:23 PM (GMT)
I think that's very sweet, good work! Also, the graphic work is very nice too, very fitting I think ^^.
Sarah - February 22, 2006 12:34 AM (GMT)
Bravo Bro your Poetry is getting better and better each and everyday.
Blues - February 23, 2006 01:10 AM (GMT)
Ok here is a new one.
To Late
Every moment that goes by
I get colder and colder
My central love has left me
I needed more time
to have the strength to
say I'm sorry.
Now it's to late to do that
I have no more life left
to do what I wish I should,
or could have done.
But in this closing statement
I'm going to say goodbye,
farewell, and I'm sorry.
Blues - March 7, 2006 01:31 AM (GMT)
Here is a new one^^
My Final Love
What happened?
Do you even care about
what happened, long ago?
Does it even matter
to you anymore?
You broke my heart
All the pain you put apon me
I have no time for this anymore
You took it all, my heart, and my love.
We had so much, what happened to that?
This is the final toll for the both of us
we must depart for the final time,
and to never return.
Goodbye My Final Love....
Blues - March 16, 2006 05:33 AM (GMT)
New One..............
Finally
I've been waiting here
for you just to show me
your smile that brightens
my day.
If you didn't show up then
my day is grey and dull,
in which no one is happy.
So I hope you show up
just to obrighten mine and
everyone elses day.
Finally you have arrived
to brighten our day.
Elisa - March 16, 2006 03:26 PM (GMT)
I like Finally ^^ I can relate to that one. Good work!
Blues - March 22, 2006 02:22 AM (GMT)
Here are two that I wrote today.
Without Me
I find that it is so upsetting
to find that you left without me.
But that doesn't really matter
anymore. If I had the choice
it wouldn't be like this
I would change my past
as fast as I coud, just
so that you wouldn't leave
Without Me
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No Time Left
I'll let it be known
for what happened, it
was such a tragic event
for this to happen
I've run out of time just so
that I could save you
But I have found that...
I ahve No Time Left.
Blues - March 25, 2006 06:22 AM (GMT)
I made this one for WiFi AllStars a clan that i'm a part of.
