Welcome!

[Kay {like3wh0a}]

PULL THE CURTAiNS
about you
Name: Kay
Gender: Female
Location: USA, my house, computer room, left corner
How You Found Us: That's a bit obvious
Password: Edit by An.

ONE FOR THE MONEY
the basics
Full Name: Jordan Dylan Sprouse
Age: 12
Parents' Names: Oliver Sprouse and Aubrey Something
House at Hogwarts: Slytherin
Year at Hogwarts: Second
Gender: Male
History: Jordan Sprouse was always an overachiever. He was born first, he had his birthday five minutes before Tanner, lost his first tooth first, and many other things one could never manage to name. The blondes were always very competitive, and Jordan was always involved in a lot of sports, but... one could just say he didn't get all O's all of the time. Really, he didn't even make E's all the time. Granted, there was always that one occasional A, but mostly....he was a troll. Well, not literally, but everyone knows what that means. At age four, he showed his first sign of magic, setting the neighbors' trash on fire. It smelled like burnt rubber for three weeks. His parents were divorced before he was born, and he loved his Mum a lot. His dad too. Because they were in the picture so late, Jordan wasn't that fond of his steps, but eventually grew to love them just the same.
Siblings Attending Hogwarts: Tanner Cole Sprouse {<3}
Siblings out of Hogwarts: None

TWO FOR THE SHOW
the appearance
Eyes: Green-blue
Hair: Blonde-ish brown, shoulder length
Piercings: None
Tattoos: None
Model Picture:
Model Name: Dylan Sprouse

THREE FOR WHAT REALLY COUNTS
the personality
Likes:
Girls
Candy
Pranks
Quidditch
Girls
Charms
Family
Cookies
Sports
Girls
Dislikes:
Stupid blondes
Socks
Beanies
Scarfs
Peanut butter
Reading for hours
Being grounded
Good Qualities: Funny, loud, and outgoing.
Bad Qualities: Sometimes his jokes are a bit too mean, he can be jerky, and very competitive.
Overall Personality: Jordan is funny...like stand up comedy funny. Ohkay, not really...sometimes his jokes can be rather mean and hurtful to other people. But he doesn't mean them to be. Because Jordan is rather athletic, he's also rather competitive. Just like any other twelve year old boy, Jordan can be a jerk, but he's also very outgoing. He's never the shy one in the group, always the first one to walk up and greet the newcomer.

THE CURTAiN CALL
the audition
Please see Kenzie Starr.

[An [[Admin]]]

Accepted.
Try to remember to leave one space (or two, if you're treating it as the end of a sentence) after an elipsis (...) rather than let the words run into it. You don't need to have them hugely spread apart; just keep in mind to leave a space so it doesn't look as messy. Avoid using "-ish" in your writing - you'd be surprised how much more mature it makes your writing look if you use actual adjectives, haha. A few other things to avoid are sentence fragments, and starting sentences with "and" or "but". Still, I think this is probably the shortest paragraph of 'constructive criticism' I've ever typed up for you on this site though, Kay; which, though wouldn't be much to some, means that you're improving in my books. I seriously think that with just a little more effort everything could be just that much better. If you ever want to re-audition, make sure to submit a new roleplaying/writing sample, though keep in mind it should be done during the time that you've been on the site.
You've previously been accepted into the Hatchling group.