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[Zachary Longbottom]

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about you
Name:Jesska
Gender: female
Location: PA, yo.
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Password: Edit by Keia

ONE FOR THE MONEY
the basics
Full Name:Zachary Jonathon Longbottom AKA Zakk
Age:16
Parents' Names:Neville and Hannah Longbottom
House at Hogwarts:Gryffindor
Year at Hogwarts:5
Gender:male
History:
On a warm spring day, the 13th of March to be exact. A small boy was born to Hannah and Neville Longbottom. "My god Neville, the boy looks just like you." Hannah said with a sigh of joy.The lights were bright to the small newborn. Neville looked at his child with joy. The baby boy was named "Zachary Jonathon Longbottom" Neville patted the child softly on his forehead. "He is going to be a bit of a rebel." Neville said with a smile. "He will most likely be just like you were in your last few years of Hogwarts" Hannah said joyfully. "Yeah. Hopefully without the studdering." Neville said with happiness in his voice.

The rooms throughout the Leaky Cauldron were filled a fume of roasted chicken as Zakk walked, well toddled down the hallways making his way slowly, but surely towards the kitchen. His mother would have surely been in there since she was the Landlady of the Leaky Cauldron. Zakk looked for her and spotted a small glance of the colorful pattern on her dress. He waddled his way towards her with a toothless smile and a tuft of dark brown hair on his head. His newborn blue eyes had turned a bright green mixed with a greyish color. Hannah grabbed him off of the tiled floor and murmured words to make the toddler go to sleep. He then soon drifted into a quiet slumber.

"Zakky, please be a good boy." Hannah said to her son.She especially said this since it was her son's first year. Zakk looked at his mother with a hint of annoyance. "Mum, why do you call me that?" His voice had lost the studder by this time. Zakk looked to his father and pulled on his shirt. Neville knelt down next to his son. "What is it Zakk?" He asked with a small glimmer in his eyes. "You won't be mad if I don't make it into Gryffindor, right Dad?" Zakk asked with a small frown. "No, Zachary we'd never be mad at you for that. We will be proud of any house that you get into." Neville said happily. "But I'll be extra proud of you if you make it into Gryffindor." Zakk nodded with a laugh. Neville laughed along with his son. He hugged his family and left them on Platform 9 and 3/4.


"Zachary, watch how many times you get into trouble this year please." His mother said with sorrow in her voice. "Mum. I didn't get into that much trouble last year ." Zakk said in a stern voice. His mother looked at him with a stern laugh. "If you call blowing up toilets in the girl's room not getting into much trouble." Then Zakk turned and laughed a bit and looked at his father. "Dad, sorry if I cause any problems in your class this year." Zakk said. "Why do you say that Zakk? You only caused a few problems last year. Most of the ones you were involved with weren't even started by you son. " Neville said to Zakk with a patient smile."Just in case. I am apoligizing in advance." Zakk said with a smile. His father nodded and laughed slightly. Zakk looked at his family with sorrow in his eyes. He then hugged them and waved good-bye as he got onto the Hogwarts Express.
Siblings Attending Hogwarts: Delilah Longbottom
Siblings out of Hogwarts:

TWO FOR THE SHOW
the appearance
Zakk can never leave his hair the way it is in the morning. It is normally dark brown and straight. Although it can never be perfect. Zakk knows this much. So he fixes it in a way he can deal with it not being in his eyes. Normally Zakk will just push it off to one side of his face.The length of his hair is about down to the bottom of his nose in the front and shorter in the back. Normally he leaves it like that since he doesn't know what to do with it. Sometimes people catch him with it spiked. He only does that when he wakes up with enough time to make it okay looking by his standards. He keeps his face clean shaven since he can't stand the sight of a five o'clock shadow. He only ever has one when he wakes up too late in the morning. He has a circular face with normal ears. Zakk also normally wakes up with small dark circles under his eyes from staying up and studying.

Zakk loves to play quidditch and from this he is somewhat muscular. He loves the work-out it is as a sport. Surprisingly he isn't like his father, who could barely fly on a broom, but is actually alright. Zakk mostly plays for fun but even when it is fun it gets some serious work-out time in. He stands normally at about 6 foot and 2 inches tall. He is somewhat skinny but that is all because of his family genes. He doesn't care much about what he looks like. Zakk knows his facial features are more like his father's but accepts it. He also makes some faces that remind the older teachers of his father. Zakk looks especially like his father,when he has a confused look plastered on his face in most of the Potions classes. Zakk does look like his father although he looks a bit like his mother which sets it off for both sides of the family.
Eyes:grey green
Hair:dark brown almost black. Mostly spiked or just left alone. It is just about to his eyebrows in the front. He also wears a hat whenever he can.
Piercings: none.
Tattoos:none
Model Picture:
Model Name:Pete Wentz

THREE FOR WHAT REALLY COUNTS
the personality
Likes:
[+]Quidditch
[+]Transfiguration
[+]Reading(sometimes)
[+]Girls
[+]Drawing(but will never admit he is good.)
[+]School(most of the time.)
[+]Spending time with his family.
[+]Hanging out with his friends.
[+]Food.
Dislikes:
[-]Getting in trouble
[-]being in detention
[-]people insulting him
[-]people insulting his family
[-]Being singled out when others get in trouble with him.
[-]Cranberries-Allergic
[-]Weird flavored Jell-o(why do the muggles make such odd flavors.)
Good Qualities:
<Defends his family name with no problem
<Intelligent
<Courageous
<Outgoing
<Laid-back
<Kind-hearted
<Calm
<Respectful
<Over-all nice person
Bad Qualities:
>Defends his family name.
>Is he too nice? [maybe people walk over him a bit]
>Argumentive when it comes to his beliefs.
>Too fierce in arguements?
>Speaking Freely about what he believes.
Overall Personality:
Zakk is a kind-hearted person who loves his family in general. His close friends are considered his family. He can be fierce in arguements when he knows he is right. He is a respectful person to his family and his teachers. Although if he got into an arguement with them,which he would never do, he would lower his respect for them only when they were arguing. He is attentive when in class. He listens to what the teachers say, even when they take the whole class in one long speech. Zakk is very friendly and outgoing. He can be outrageous at times. He is often loud when he is hanging out with his friends.

Although Zakk seems like a good person he does have his own little rebellious side. He would talk back to teachers if they didn't agree with him even if they knew he was right. Zakk would speak freely about things he believed in. Zakk can fight like no tommorrow, he can be aggressive in most fights. He snaps more in arguements than when he is calm. Normally Zakk is calm and laid-back. It takes quite a bit to get him worked up, which is a good thing. But, If you get him worked up, the truth is mostly likely you won't be able to calm him down for a while. Only his family and friends can calm him quickly. Zakk knows it is bad to fight people and that's why he doesn't get into too many fights. The only fights he would ever get into would be something about either his family or his believes.

THE CURTAiN CALL
the audition
What It Is: Introduction
What Genre It Is:Creatures of the Night
Sample:
A dark alley was where a young slender 5'6 female was walking. At her oldest she looked to be 20 years of age. Her grey green eyes were heavily underlined with black eyeliner. Her shoulder length almost bleach blonde hair had golden blonde highlights that were somewhat covered by a black beanie. She wore a black hoodie that covered her white tee. She wore a black studded belt with a pair of dark denim jeans. The length of her jeans covered her black knee high combat boots. She was holding a golden crescent moon pendant in her hand. It would've been sitting in between her collarbones normally. A golden chain held it. It had been a gift she received from her mother. The first time she had worn it, it gained her a horrible scar and what she thought was a horrible curse. The scar was finally disappearing from two inches above her ankle.

Then she walked into another alley and found it was getting fuller. She knew the explanation. There was a large vampire hangout ahead. It was also a place for rogue lycans to go to. She made a small growl as someone bumped into her. Her top fangs extended and her bottom gum started to bleed. She spit the blood into the dirt. In front of the club was a group of mortals waiting to get in. ' Foolish Mortals.' she thought. Haley did almost look like a mortal but she thought the only differences between her and mortals were the sounds that rose from her lungs and her transformation every full moon. Haley looked forward, away from the club and the pulsing beats were finally fading into the night behind her.

She was trying to get to the park, in the center of the huge city, where Lycans and Vampires roamed free. Most mortals thought that the fairy tales did not exist. She wished that they didn't but she could not change the past. But the story was that there was only very few of both species. The truth is that there was much more than that which the fairy tales had told the mortals about. As she walked down the alley, there was still a small group of vampires waiting. They began to gather around her thinking she was mortal. The 5'6 small figure let out an inhuman noise and the vampires almost jumped back away from her. She smirked and laughed. They had jumped so quickly it was funny. Her fangs had finally retracted as she entered the gateway to the huge city park.

'Ahh. Finally.' she thought. She sat down on a bench trying to focus up in the top of the trees to see if anyone was around. She laughed and thought ' what am I doing here? ' She didn't even know why she wanted to go to the park. You might be asking what is her name...well I'll tell you. Haley Thompson by day. But at night this female was called Crymson. The reason why this name chosen for her, at such a young age was unknown to her but she had a prophecy to fulfill. The Elders of course knew this.

[Keia [[Admin]]]

Accepted.

Zachary seems like he will be a good brother for Delilah. I'm just wondering, was he close to Robert? He likes to cause some trouble... thats good we don't have to many rebels at Hogwarts right now.

Your roleplaying seems good, but you should try to not start a lot of sentences with he or she. I know it's hard to not start a sentence with those two word because I'm still trying to think of new sentence starters.

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[An [[Admin]]]

Overall, I think it was a pretty good application. ^^ I just have, have, have to throw in my two cents though. Try to remember to put a space after your colon's, like, rather than just "Full Name:Zachary Jonathan Longbottom", I would put a space in between the colon and the 'Z'. Also keep in mind; one space after the comma, and two spaces after the period. Try to remember punctuation, so that your sentences don't just run on into each other. Like Keia said, refrain from starting all of your sentences with 'he' or the character's name. Mm... one more thing. Well, two, actually, but the more important one, I'd have to say, is to avoid sentence fragments. Unless it's intended to be stylistic, I would stray away from it. Join two sentences, or add more to a sentence, if you have to.

The one last thing I have to say is; it's 'stuttering', not 'studdering'. Heh. Just a little... random throw-in there. xD
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