Tamate Uichi - February 18, 2009 06:26 AM (GMT)
AthleticPower: Electric Flight:
If Jasper wishes to fly then he will turn into a kind of electric figure-being thingy and fly using surges of energy.Electric Blast:
Jasper can charge his hand with electricity and shoot out electric blasts. Electricity will run around his arm and through his veins until he releases the destructive charge.Electric Mood Swing:
Jasper often has mood swings. Sometimes when he becomes very angry he will release a blast of electricity that will travel about 10 meters and is destructive. He can not control the blasts and is often seriously hurt by them.Earth Electricity:
Jasper can send electric charges traveling through the earth and choose a location for them to come out and zap something.Electric Beings:
Jasper can create electric beings to help him fight. The beings can shoot electric charges, do the earth electricity, and some other of Jasper's powers, just weaker.Electric Speed:
Jasper can travel at speeds of up to 200kmph. When he travels this far he turns into an electric being so he ca sustain no physical injuries as a result of the g-force. Looks:
Jasper has long-ish brown hair. He usually wears a white suit with little black things. just like the pic.History:
When Jasper was 17 he was terribly sick in an orphanage and was close to death. Then a vampire named Calel found him. The vampire posed as a doctor, but knew he couldn’t save him. So he bit him and using great restraint did not drain him, but used just enough venom to change him. When Calel took him home Jasper instantly hated the place. Although, one thing he did like was his new-found brothers and sisters. He grew to love one of them, his sister (who I'll make later)
Jasper and his sister hated their 'father' Calel. So, one day when they were walking up a large cliff Calel 'tripped' and fell down. Those who liked Calel retaliated against Jasper and his sister for this, but they managed to hold them at bay. Tears flowed from their eyes when they killed them, but they knew it had to be done to sustain their love for each other.
One day a group of hunters came along. They took Jasper's sister away and Jasper tracked them to the Nether. But when he arrived there were so many scents that he couldn't track them further. So now Jasper searches every day for his sister whom he loves dearly. (that sounds kinda wrong but they aren't blood brother and sister, and they just refer to each other as brother and sister out of habit.)Race:
His powers. His fangs... No real weapons...Personality:
Ever since his sister was taken away Jasper has been mentally unstable. He is prone to extreme mood swings, often resulting in serious injuries to himself and/or deaths to others.
Gothlin T'ai - February 18, 2009 06:27 AM (GMT)
I'm detecting a slight Twilight influence here...
Tamate Uichi - February 18, 2009 06:28 AM (GMT)
OK. I confess. I saw it on Sunday and kinda like the idea...
Gothlin T'ai - February 18, 2009 06:48 AM (GMT)
So you blatantly ripped it off?
Tamate Uichi - February 18, 2009 06:52 AM (GMT)
Gothlin T'ai - February 18, 2009 06:56 AM (GMT)
Um... out of interest, is there anything about this character that isn't ripped off Twilight?
Tamate Uichi - February 18, 2009 06:59 AM (GMT)
The fact that only him and his sister survived, ah... The mind reading power isn't as good... Seriously, a lot of the powers weren't intended as rip offs. I wasn't thinking of the movie when I made them but they ended up very similar... And as i said before, the idea came before I saw the movie.
Gothlin T'ai - February 18, 2009 07:08 AM (GMT)
Alright, so you've added an alternate ending. However, other than that, the only different thing in this profile is the picture, which is from Vampire Knight anyway, and that's a relatively similar story anyway <_<
The mind power is more of a mix between two different powers used by two different characters in the books, but it's still quite obviously copied. Bits of the history are virtually copied word-for-word from the books/movie. The rest of the powers are nearly identical as well, and even the name is the same as one of the vampires in the book.
Tamate Uichi - February 18, 2009 07:11 AM (GMT)
Well, I haven't read the book. And I haven't read vampire knight. But look, if you really want, should I change the history? Although I'm keeping the vegetarian bit...
Gothlin T'ai - February 18, 2009 07:12 AM (GMT)
What about changing everything so that it's actually original?
Tamate Uichi - February 18, 2009 07:16 AM (GMT)
Well, they were the type of powers I wanted anyway before I saw the movie. I didn't realize the name bit... So why don't I just try and come up with a different history...
Tamate Uichi - February 18, 2009 07:25 AM (GMT)
OK. Changed the history. Thre's still some some the same, but how is it now?
Survuse - February 18, 2009 09:16 AM (GMT)
Wow... Gothlin is right. It is a direct/ word for word copy off Twilight.
Icarus - February 18, 2009 12:02 PM (GMT)
COME ON! Vegitarian vampires? Where the fun in that XD
I'm gonna approve this, as I hate twilight and like the idea of the vamps in it killing each other, pathetic failures they are.
Vayne Sera - February 18, 2009 03:25 PM (GMT)
Not approved untill you actually write a description, instead of putting a picture from an anime. <,<
Icarus - February 18, 2009 03:33 PM (GMT)
Which means NO! Vayne kicks my ass in terms of authority, so no postie until you obey his every command :P XD
Tamate Uichi - February 19, 2009 05:41 AM (GMT)
So was there a decision that we have to have descriptions?
Lilith - February 19, 2009 06:32 AM (GMT)
Acorn's already using the character which is in that pic for Acorn. XD :lol:
Icarus - February 19, 2009 12:20 PM (GMT)
We said that pictures are acceptable, but a few lines of text making a few changes or really showing thats what they look like are probably best to include to stop two members posting the same picture (As sometimes happens)
Barrez - February 20, 2009 12:19 AM (GMT)
Indeed, Icarus is correct. And I hardly think ten votes (at current time) counts as 'almost everyone'. Remember, a third of those who voted wanted to get rid of pictures altogether. And as a side note, couldn't you have made some effort at resizing the picture?
Vayne Sera - February 20, 2009 12:44 AM (GMT)
WTF! DOES NOBODY KNOW THAT WE HAVE A "NO MEDIA CHARACHTER" RULE! THIS IS JUST A CHARACHTER FROM "VAMPIRE KNIGHT" WITH "TWILIGHT" POWERS, WITH NO ORIGINAL CONTENT!
Not approved. -.-
Gothlin T'ai - February 20, 2009 06:22 AM (GMT)
Actually, it's a character from Twilight with a mish-mash of powers from multiple twilight characters and the appearance of a character from Vampire Knight...
Seriously Vayne :P get your media sorted out
Vayne Sera - February 21, 2009 12:03 AM (GMT)
Having watched neither, and done minimal research after someone pointed this out, it makes little difference. It's still just media charachters roughly stapled together.
Tamate Uichi - February 21, 2009 04:59 AM (GMT)
OK. I've completely re-done the powers. I've added a bit of a text description and I tried to resize the pic but it won't work. Also added the personality section.
Is it good NOW?
Vayne Sera - February 21, 2009 03:05 PM (GMT)
No, it's not good NOW because we don't have a personality section, and you're pissing me off.
Icarus - February 21, 2009 07:16 PM (GMT)
Yeah the personality stuff is a bit redundant.
I would say that the powers were now ok (as powers go, not many are incredaibly detailed anyway), but the description thing is not good. Add a few more lines to that, detailing changes to the picture and trying to build an image.
Hmm... history is a little suspect as it still contains that smell thing, and you'd have to consult Barrez on vampire family things, but other than that it looks ok. Just fix the points I said and approved, but bear in mind I cant stop Vayne smashing you into next week with a ban hammer if you rp with this guy without making the changes.
Tomas Hydraxus - February 21, 2009 09:33 PM (GMT)
*Raises head sharply*
You mean we can't have a personality section? I have one.....
But I think the point is, just because you've added it doesn't make your profile any better.....
Vayne Sera - February 21, 2009 10:05 PM (GMT)
Indeed. Note that you can if you feel like, and it was mostly the use of caps lock and italics to imply an offensive tone that pissed me off. Actually, nobody should ever approve this.
Lilith - February 21, 2009 11:45 PM (GMT)
Doesn't Ashni have spastic electric time powers? I mean, it's fine if you've got electric powers as well, but don't copy hers! <_<
Vayne Sera - February 22, 2009 12:54 AM (GMT)
He won't be copying anyone for a while now. At least 2 weeks actually!
terribletrygon - February 22, 2009 01:46 PM (GMT)
And this is why I love Vayne.
Tomas Hydraxus - February 22, 2009 03:22 PM (GMT)
Is that.... Sarcasm, I detect? Or am I just demonstrating my rampant paranoia? :P
terribletrygon - February 22, 2009 09:01 PM (GMT)
Actually I am not being sarcastic. If I was there would have been a smiley at the end of the sentence.
Vayne Sera - February 23, 2009 06:11 PM (GMT)
Do you love me because I can hand out massive bans and laugh about it? Or because you have the joys of mopping up The Nether's rejects such as Scarlett?
Tamate Uichi - March 8, 2009 05:54 AM (GMT)
So you're telling me I was just banned for three weeks because I accidentally have a power that's the same as Ashni's? I swear, the only power she's used whilst I was posting with her was electric wings, and I haven't looked at her profile!
So, you know what? I really liked this profile, and was looking forwards to using it, but I give up, I'm sorry if the profile doesn't live up to the staff's perfect standard expectation. I'm sorry I suck at profiles! But I thought that this site was about posting for fun, not pissing people off by all the perfection they need, I mean, I joined this site for pleasure, and now it's just becoming a nazi-like organization, this site is NOT what it used to be. And look, I am so sorry if my little rant has pissed off all you staff members, but I don't give a damn! Go ahead, ban me! I've got my own site to post on!
Lilith - March 8, 2009 06:30 AM (GMT)
Oh yeah, cause that site's fantastically original. And by "Nazi like' organisation, what do you mean? That we hate Jews or something? Wtf mate.
Soveliss - March 8, 2009 02:49 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (Tamate Uichi @ Mar 8 2009, 05:54 AM)|
|I'm sorry if the profile doesn't live up to the staff's perfect standard expectation. |
Compared to most other sites the nether is actually really relaxed and the profile isn't that hard to do. Seriously I know of sites that the background/history has to be at least 3/4 times the size (and in a smaller font)
Zoaroster - March 8, 2009 03:51 PM (GMT)
If ya'll don't mind me entering something. The last RP site I was on required at least a seven page single space times new roman font twelve text size history before they would consider you. This place is wonderfully relaxed.
Icarus - March 8, 2009 04:20 PM (GMT)
As long as you can write your own stuff, then we dont really care as long as it fits in with the canon (which has to happen on all sites)
Icarus - March 8, 2009 04:21 PM (GMT)
Oh yeah, it wasnt the pwoers we didnt like. It was the fact he ripped off twilight and didnt do what Vayne asked.... idiot