Trojii, C&C to be posted here.

[Farlonor]

C&C of the Trojii to be posted here.

[HLY]

right, added the great spirits in the mythology section

thoughs?

[Farlonor]

Looks quite okay, how "present" are they? do they regularly get mortal form or are they more of the "appearing in dreams" type of spirits?

[HLY]

it depends, some of em like mortal form, some like dreams, prety much the spirit of light and the one of fire are almost always mortal.

wind and water are more dream based

and death is random

[Farlonor]

A bit like Greek Gods?

[HLY]

added a bit about some more trojii stuff naimly:
Diplomacy
The grand chief of the tribes
a bit more of the great spirits
and war formations

[Farlonor]

Looking good, looking good. I like the new info, but I think that you give a little too little crucial info, there is a great deal of blank space. Like with the characters, ther is little info on what they do and why they are famous for it.

[HLY]

Give me a minute mate, i was just setting the ground rules at the moment.....

and half of yours have les info

[Farlonor]

That's true I'm afraid..

[HLY]

padded out

[Farlonor]

I have a question.

Do these regiments regularly get added on to? Because otherwise you've got all those half regiments running around the battlefield.

[HLY]

oh yeah, ummmm, probably....I guess, I think i had an idea for that but forgot to post it

[Flailing-Axes]

The battles seem good. You do however have some of your figures wrong. In this time period the Astraka outnumber the Raga, and at this time the daemon king is not present, only the storm lord.

Daemons aren't tools of war: use some of our other beasts, like storm beasts.

And one more point.........this war aint the biggest war we've fought, not by a long shot. The first war against the Tzaki was world-wide, we are talking millions here, this is nothing but a skirmish for the storm lord.

We need to adapt our battles a fair bit. I could edit that Daemons are now servants of Skaha. Kanh are already immortal by the way, you have said at start that they are trying to stop them being immortal. Think of us as flayed ones with more skin

[Flailing-Axes]

Loving the latest on the battles. just be careful to check mine first, much of our stuff doesn't match up.

I wrote 2 days ago how the Kanh were defeated, water would never manage to do the trick, after all, the Kanh are pretty damn good at taming the seas anyway. Now what would be interesting would be if your last stand was in that massive underwater city, a great besiegment were the Trojii held the advantage. I'm sure I can make it possible for the Kanh to breath underwater, storm queens could just stat on top to generate pockets of air. And this helps you as that means to lightening will be gutting half the ocean. We can still have that battle you put up, just dont make it the last stand.

[HLY]

It's not the last stand, it's just a battle....I still have alot more. and ligtning won't work as I have my own mages to counter that......and underwater I'd still think the fishmen would hold the advantage no-matterwhat your storm queens did.

+ I have big monster wlae-beasts on my side......read about the Hyleekee and then re-think your dominance