The Album of Rawrness

This album will be filled with my Pokemon sprites >;] Thank you to pooty who helps me see what i can change in each of my creations C:

Heres my Killer Mareep 8D


And My Zombidoof Portrait;;


So I herd joo liek ZOMBIEKIPS??


Gallery of Fusions-


Gallery of Devamps-




Retypes in third post!
Comments are loved<3

Inspiration has hit me and I made a VIOLATEDWOOPERRRR!! 8D

RETYPES

These are much better than when you first started (or, when I first saw them.).

Crit time!

Killer Mareep - it looks like a Mareep with red all over it. Try adding realism to the blood, and possibly some dark coloring and claws.

Zombidoof Portrait - Nothing here, except why is there a brown line to the left of him?

Zombiekip - Zombies don't have blood. The outline on the cheeks is the same color of the shading in said area.

Mewankey - The tail should be behind the arm, unless it's at a certain view.

Venopoke - Try attaching the antennae better.

Jiratot - I never said this at the contest, but redo the "hat's" shading. It looks like they are from two different dimensions where light is distorted.

Dittastly - Make the shade color lighter.

Sphelanaphy - The shading is WAAAAY off. Redo it.

Pikartle - The outline on the hands is either missing or too bright in places.

Exeggusaur - Nothing to improve in my view. Just add some shading under the front head.

Arbeezing - The chest looks plain; the bottom "gas dispensers" aren't fully formed.

Pikachi - The outline is rugged in some places.

Jiratina - Head looks weird with the hat on that way. Try adding shading for more realism.

Zaptina - Darken the outline in places and lighten some shading.

Lugia - Put dots on the outline, as you did on your Togepi.

Suicune - Same thing as Lugia.

Togepi - Perfection.

Violated Wooper - I love the expression. Add light and shade to the licks.

Electric Manaphy - I like the concepts used. Try recoloring Manaphy.

Ice Buneary - I've strangely never done an Ice retype. Don't have that many sparkles, or it'll look like a dotted sculpture.

Grass Probopass - My favorite out of these. Why is the leaf facing us cut off?

Psychic Pachirisu - Add something relating to magicians or something, and it's perfect.


Those are just some tips to improve your sprites. Overall, they're awesome.

Woah. Thanks for the Tips. First of all, all the Fusions were done when i was pretty new to this whole spriting thing. The Zombiekip; Thats his BRAAAINS. C: With the Killer Mareep, If i did put claws, I dont think anyone would see them.
Is this better?
I have great ideas for the Pachi! I must work! 8D
EDIT: Hows this?

OKAY PACHIRISU, WHY ARE YOU COVERED IN GLOWING PINK BLOOD?

ANY WHY IS THE MAGICIAN GONE?? xD

On Probopass, that's better, but there's lighting where there should be shading on the far leaf. The head is creating a shadow on it, so put it there.

The Magician had...Things to do >:)

Ok this better?

The far arm, not the near one. By "far", I mean the one behind his head.

kay. This good? 83

Lighten the VERY DARK shading you added, and...

: PERFECTION!

O.o

Thats worthy of an 'lolwut'?
Good?


Btw: Help me pick out a new Ds stylus! xD I was thinking about a Shaymin one but that would'nt fit in the Ds... :/

The Pokemon styluses don't fit in the DS. I have a Piplup one. I know.

I have an idea. Get one color stylus, and PAINT IT.
For example,

HOW TO MAKE A SHAYMIN SKY FORM STYLUS:

-get a white stylus
-paint top green
-paint a tiny part below the green red
-use

And it has each Pokemon's colors!

I should try this. xD

I should try that! I have about 5 pink styluses lying around here somewere...
And is mah Probo perfect? I shaded the dark part lighter. 83

Where is it? o.o

In my 2nd last post |3

I don't see an updated version anywhere.

OH KEWL IT UPLOADED

I HAVE FURY.