Hiding

[Emily-lee Carter]

Lyric Rose was in the janitors cupboard hiding from civilisation. She didn't want to take part in the cliquey girls only way of comunicating high pitched squels. So she was going to hide in the janitors cupboard until she felt it safe to come out and find a quiet light place to paint

[Tulip-Rayne]

tulip was walking past the janitors office when the door opened and pushed her onto the floor. She looked up and saw a strange girl, she hadnt seen here. tulip got up and stared back at her and told told her to leave her alone. with a sarcastic remark about her hiding in the janitors closet.

[Emily-lee Carter]

Lyric Rose stared at the girl she had knocked down when she'd opened the door. her first thought was to say sorry. That was not what she was going to do anymore. So what if she was in the janitors closet??But then again she was only a first year this other girl could be fifth year easy. Then again she had some pride " well i didn't meanto knock you down but did you have to be so rude?"
The look on the girls face suggested that maybe she did

[Tulip-Rayne]

tulip looked at the girl with disgust and said "i dont call it rude, i just speak my mind, u brat" "whats your name?"

[Emily-lee Carter]

Slightly stung by that last comment she replied."lyric Rose" she said this quite proudly because this was the name she chose herself something she was definatly proud of!!
"yours?" she asked trying not to look interesting because although she hated to admit it there was something that intriged her about this girl.

[Tulip-Rayne]

"my name?" she replied "do you think you have the privlidge of it?" *sigh* "i guess telling you would not be bad for my health, its tulip, Tulip Rayne."

"so why are you hiding in there? are you hiding from someone?
Whatever it is im sure its pointless."

i have no need to talk to creatures like you anyway, i have my own life.
but before i leave answer my questions

[Emily-lee Carter]

*wow she's a charmer* Lyric Rose thought sarcastically she didn't spend alot of time talking but she could do a mean line in sarcasim.

" i wasn't really hiding just trying to get away" she began" i dont fit in with the cliquey girls that i'm expected to like adn i needed to get away from their high pitched squeaks before i killed them"she said before adding" or myself" as an after thought.

*If you have your own life why are you asking about mine* lyric rose thought this but didn't dare say it for fear that this new girl Tulip might leave. After all she'd taken the time to talk to her, maybe not nicely but she'd asked her about herself.

"So what are you doing here?" she asked again trying not to sound to eggar for a reply.

[Tulip-Rayne]

"i dont like anyone in this school, so i can kinda understand why your hiding but, thats not what i would do, hiding means your afraid, and i do not think you are, are you?"
*seirously why im i still talking to this girl. every word that comes outta her mouth intrieges me more. goddammit. she thought to herself*

"but what im doing her is none of your business! ur pure ignorance, do you know that!?"

[Emily-lee Carter]

This made Lyric Rose mmmmadddddd

"I'm pure ignorance? that doesn't even make sense and why am i asking about your life because you asked about mine only returning the favour maybe i won't bother in future if your gonna be such an ass about it!!!!!!!"

lyric Rose stared at her aponant breathing hard and waiting to hear what she'd say next

[Tulip-Rayne]

haha *tulip chuckled*

"its funny to see you creatures get mad, but your the only one ive had an actule conversation with, hmm mabye theres hope for you in the future. "

"and gonna stop breathing hard, you sound like a dog"

[Emily-lee Carter]

This stopped lyric Rose in her tracks. Which was odd because no-one ever managed to stop her mid rant. She stopped breathing hard but tried to make it lkook as though it wasn't just to appease Tulip... she failed.

*theres hope for me ? what does that mean? how can she stay so calm like that?I should proberbly go* and without another word she left Tulip standing there not quite sure what to make of her first day at St Harrows.

[Tulip-Rayne]

*tulip watched her walk away, and slowly thought, this could be interesting for me.....*

[Professor Anax]

(Okay Tulip, a few pointers:


1. NEVER EVER use 'ur' because it's sooo annoying. And tring not to make a whole post just speech. You need to say who is saying it and how they are saying it etc etc

2. you can't say that you got pushed onto the floor by the door because EMily-lee EVER mentioned pushing the door opening. That would be god-modding, controlling other people's characters. Big no no.

3. You claim to hate everyone here, Lyrics rose is the FIRST person you have met! So how can you hate everyone? At least think before you post.

4. The way you put the post together is bad...not meanign to be harsh but it is, for instance:

"my name?" she replied "do you think you have the privlidge of it?" *sigh* "i guess telling you would not be bad for my health, its tulip, Tulip Rayne."

"so why are you hiding in there? are you hiding from someone?
Whatever it is im sure its pointless."

i have no need to talk to creatures like you anyway, i have my own life.
but before i leave answer my questions



Would be better as:



"My name?" she replied "Do you think you have the privlidge of it?" she sighed, "I guess telling you would not be bad for my health, its Tulip, Tulip Rayne."

"so why are you hiding in there?" she asked, "Are you hiding from someone?
Whatever it is im sure its pointless." she said smirking.

"I have no need to talk to creatures like you anyway," she said snobbily, "I have my own life, "she paused before adding, "But before i leave answer my questions." Tulip demanded.)