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| Spellbinder |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 10:56 PM
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![]() Can you say spaz? Group: Members Posts: 281 Member No.: 13 Joined: 28-January 05 |
Table of Contents:
Chapter One: A Futile Attempt Chapter Two: Chapter Three: Chapter Four: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter One~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -----------------------------A Futile Attempt---------------------------------- Rosa looked up at Jenna and Isaac. She laughed as they exchanged puzzled glances because of Garet. They were at a large table outside of Kraden’s home, and they were studying. Jenna and Isaac were on one long side, while Garet was alone on one of the shorter sides. Rosa was currently alone on the other long side, with books piled high around her. Most were on the ground, so it was surprising that she had four stacks taller than her head. “No, no. I mean we should try to sneak up there! I want to know what there is!” Garet whined from across the table. “Then go, idiot.” Jenna said, throwing a book at him. Kraden looked from the bookshelf and sighed. “Jenna, what did I tell you about the books?” He asked, lifting his right eyebrow. “’Don’t throw them, it’s a misuse of books. Even if hitting him with one might be fun sometimes’.” She answered, and both Isaac and Rosa laughed. “Right. Okay, so Garet. You want to see Mount Aleph, correct?” Kraden asked, smiling. Garet nodded ferociously, causing everyone to try to hold back their laughter again. “Okay. Then we’ll study it.” “What? Why not go. It’s right there!” Garet practically yelled. “Garet, you know it’s guarded heavily.” Rosa answered, being the know-it-all she was. “Uh-huh. So we sneak. Duh.” Jenna said, agreeing with Garet for once. “Besides, I really want to figure out how to help Felix. Maybe we could get some answers.” “True. But sneaking in is a bad idea. If we got caught, there’s no saying what our parents would do to us!” Rosa said, louder than she normally was. She looked back down at the book she was reading, and continued to sketch what she thought of when she read it. Kraden had told her to do this, seeing as she had no imagination whatsoever. He wanted her to draw it, because she was an excellent artist, and then add some features. Her picture wasn’t all that creative, but Kraden would probably make her add more details. Suddenly, he was over her shoulder. “Excellent job, Rosa. But it lacks that creativity I was hoping for. Or is it not quite done?” Kraden asked, sitting down next to her. “Not done yet. I have to finish sketching the rest of it.” Rosa whispered. Kraden took the book. “Imagine what it looks like, dear.” He smiled, and walked over to Garet. He was drawing what he read. “Too much imagination, Garet. You have to draw what you read. I don’t believe that that big cauldron is really in there, seeing as I’ve read every book in that library and don’t remember a cauldron in any of them.” Garet flushed and Rosa giggled. Kraden moved on to Isaac, who was reading about the elements. “Good, Isaac. Focusing on your weaker points is an excellent way to study.” He said, and then moved to Jenna. She was just doodling randomly. “And you are studying... the... atmosphere of Garet’s mind, yes?” “Ha, no. I have nothing to study, Kraden.” Jenna said, and looked up at him. “You have everything to study, Jenna.” He argued, then looked at Rose motioned for her to hand him a book. She did so, and he plopped it in front of Jenna. “Read. Now.” -------------------- ~*~*~*~*~*~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |~|Saturos|~|Atalanta|~|Coatlicue|~|Flora|~|Megaera|~|Nereid|~| ~*~*~*~*~*~ |
| alex teh eval |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 11:04 PM
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Newcomer Group: Members Posts: 21 Member No.: 38 Joined: 26-February 06 |
pretty good, bindyspell. nice work
did you just write this? and are there going to be just the four chapters? and also, from what I can understand, you're re-writing the beginning of the story from the game, with a character called Rosa. correct? (btw, im begging you, read my fic which I wrote like, an hour ago. -------------------- www.kingdomofloathing.com <---- if I'm not here, I'm here. great website, absolutly hilarious.
read my GS fanfic, 'Midnight Eyes', posted in the videogame section here.... go on, you know you want to... |
| Spellbinder |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 11:07 PM
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![]() Can you say spaz? Group: Members Posts: 281 Member No.: 13 Joined: 28-January 05 |
I wrote this a while ago. and no, there'll be more chapters than four. And yeah, Rosa. hehe... Hey, I got bored, okay?
And sure, i'll read it. -------------------- ~*~*~*~*~*~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |~|Saturos|~|Atalanta|~|Coatlicue|~|Flora|~|Megaera|~|Nereid|~| ~*~*~*~*~*~ |
| alex teh eval |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 11:19 PM
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Newcomer Group: Members Posts: 21 Member No.: 38 Joined: 26-February 06 |
I guess I could wait for you to finish the story to find this out, but does your story agree with the game? As in, if your story had happened, there is a reason Rosa wasn't in the game.
If you understand me. errr... yeah. -------------------- www.kingdomofloathing.com <---- if I'm not here, I'm here. great website, absolutly hilarious.
read my GS fanfic, 'Midnight Eyes', posted in the videogame section here.... go on, you know you want to... |
| Spellbinder |
Posted: Apr 15 2007, 12:54 AM
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![]() Can you say spaz? Group: Members Posts: 281 Member No.: 13 Joined: 28-January 05 |
indeed, I understood.
And no, it's the real story. But there's a reason they did not include her, of course. They had to take her out because, well, you'll see. And no, it's perfectly PG. -------------------- ~*~*~*~*~*~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |~|Saturos|~|Atalanta|~|Coatlicue|~|Flora|~|Megaera|~|Nereid|~| ~*~*~*~*~*~ |
| alex teh eval |
Posted: Apr 15 2007, 01:03 AM
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Newcomer Group: Members Posts: 21 Member No.: 38 Joined: 26-February 06 |
coolies, im excited for this
I'm already putting up a new chapter for mine. read it in a minute -------------------- www.kingdomofloathing.com <---- if I'm not here, I'm here. great website, absolutly hilarious.
read my GS fanfic, 'Midnight Eyes', posted in the videogame section here.... go on, you know you want to... |
| Spellbinder |
Posted: Apr 15 2007, 02:39 PM
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![]() Can you say spaz? Group: Members Posts: 281 Member No.: 13 Joined: 28-January 05 |
It's awesome. Mine shall be up soon.
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