Why do the ... texture whatever things go through the image? D:
Also, the colors don't really blend in that well. It looks awkward to see it just sort of swerve then poof, gray.
Text overlapping a main point of the image = no. u____u
Maybe you played around with the opacity a little too much?
*shot for voicing opinion*
Nah, disregard this post. I'd rather not have to face m19 because he'll just send me back into the kitchen. u_u