Starting., hey ya

[ChrisKay]

Sorry for making a new topic, but I thought with this, people will notice it rather than if I update my SC thread.

STARTING

01. starting over hi-fi/lo-fi
Amuro Namie - CAN'T SLEEP CAN'T EAT I'M SICK
02. Rebirth hi-fi/lo-fi
Hamasaki Ayumi - STEP you
03. RE-VISIONS hi-fi/lo-fi
Koda Kumi - love across the ocean
04. Graduation hi-fi/lo-fi
Koda Kumi - feel
05. Respect life hi-fi/lo-fi
Hamasaki Ayumi - alterna
06. Beyond the sea hi-fi/lo-fi
TiA - Ryuusei
07. Fly Away ～僕たちの翼～ hi-fi/lo-fi
Tamaki Nami - Believe
08. Always with you hi-fi/lo-fi
an Indonesian cover jazz song
09. Secret garden hi-fi/lo-fi
Hamasaki Ayumi - forgiveness
10. Game hi-fi/lo-fi
Hamasaki Ayumi - GAME
11. DRIVE hi-fi/lo-fi
BoA - MOTO
12. Words hi-fi/lo-fi
Koda Kumi - 1000 Words
13. say yeah feat. 安室奈美恵 hi-fi/lo-fi
Amuro Namie - Yes

Finally an album after 7 singles. >w<
I didn't put every songs from singles though, like the ones from X.X.X. singles, because I couldn't re-sing all of them. Oh yes. I did sing ALL of them again, except for Graduation, coz I thought that's perfect already.

Alright, my point is....I need people to give comments on my singing. How are they? Has there any improvement since my debut single?
Please be blunt and honest. You don't have to tell me "That's nice. I like the cover, bla bla bla."
Instead, I want you to criticize my songs as you like it. Let me know what you think about this song. Is it good enough? Or there could be more improvements to it? Say anything what you want about this album, I need to know your true opinions. Don't be afraid to criticize, coz without them, I will never know which part I messed up. Ok? :3

[shindei]

wow so many songs! I'll listen to them now and give you my honest opinion later kay?

01. I really think it's very good, the only thing that I have to complain about is that you're not singing very clearly, sometimes I can't really hear what you are singing.
02. I think you are mumbling a bit again, at the chorus you aren't really pronouncing the words very clearly.
03. Pretty good!
04. I think you got the wrong link ^.^;, it's not feel but alterna again...
05. Hmmm it sounds good, but it would be better if you put more power into the chorus.
06. Pretty good!

[ChrisKay]

Yeah, people at other forums also thinks that I need to work on pronounciation. Alright Shindei. Thanks for the comments.

I'm waiting for your the other song review.

By the way, I've fixed the link to feel.

[shindei]

07. Good job! Especially the chorus, I think you did great!
08. Wow this song is interesting!! It sounds good! Nothing that I would really point out and complain about here.
09. Good Job!!
10. Hmmm, it would sound better if your chorus was more powerful. I think you should sing and pronounce the words more clearly at the verse, because you are singing fast, it's a hard hard to hear exactly what you are singing...
11. Good job!
12. I think the pronunciation is pretty good think time, but maybe put a little more emotion ?
13. Pretty good again! But your vocals seems too loud compared to the music, it might be better if the volume was a bit lower?

Yeah okies, overall I think you did a great job, the only thing again is singing more clearly, and sometimes putting a bit more emotions. I think you've definitely improved sinc eyour debut, keep it up ChrisKay!!!

Oh btw, the BG in your sig, is it Hong Kong? I recognize those signs in the back XDDDDDD.

[ChrisKay]

Thank you Shindei
Thanks a lot for reviewing my songs & pointing out my mistakes.

I think I should practice a bit more before joining N-trax. He he.


Oh and yes. It's HK. My friend took it during her holiday and I thought "recycling" it into a sig xD

[furitsuke]

1) Hmm... yeah, you vocals are not clear XDD seems like the music is covering up your vocals.
2) Great song!!
3) Great song!!
4) Good song!! However, your voice seems a bit soft. You might wanna sing a bit louder
5) Oh yeah!! Love this song!
6) Great song
7) Wow!! This is a fast song, and you have done great in following the fast pace music!!
8) Nice! Your national language song You sound so natural in singing Indonesian More indonesian songs next time ok?

I shall rate the rest tomorrow

[ChrisKay]

Thank you Furi XD
I hope you'll consider my PM

[M-chan]

First Note: Those links aren't working for me I had to go to your page first XD

01. Like furri said, the vocals are not clear, and i hear loud voices from the background, are they there in purpose??
02. Like in the first single, there are some mumbling (like i sometimes have in my songs... ). And you can hear Ayu's "1 2 3 4 You & me" and stuff in the background, but those aren't as loud as in you first-record.
03. Ah alterna XDD In this song (especially in the start of the song) I couldn't hear (i mean understand what you are talking) your voice. But I must say that the lyrics go well with instrumental!
04. There was a lot of loud voices, that hurt my ear. The Instrumental especially sounded like it was too loud..
05. I couldn't hear much of the lyrics.. @.@;
06. I like the lyrics and the instrumental is very pleasent
07. In the chorus there was the back-ground-voice of the instrumental, it was hearable so the chorus was very much of a mix of the voices..
08. Omg indonesian? Indoneasian sounds weird But this song is beautiful!!! Good job with it!
09. Again mumble where i couldn't hear everything or understand the lyrics. Maybe it's my ears? XP
10. Umm? It sometimes went like up and down and up and etc. I mean both music and vocals XD
11. I've been waiting for this! But your voice was too loud and it had many loud lod parts >.>
12. This one sounded a lot like the track #11. Loud voices again..
13. Sorry but the "I'm sending words~" parts is hilarious XDD
14. I didn't hear anything. No music at all o_o
15. Again Indonesian This one was very quiet. But it got louder The Indoneasian lyrics sound nice

I hope you don't hate me now from all those critics, but that was me fully honest

[ChrisKay]

THanks for the comments M.

Actually "say yeah" music will play after 30 seconds. If you turn the volume up, you can simply hear slight whispers in the background before the actual song play.

[furitsuke]

9) Your voice is rather like mumble a bit i guess
10) woo... you seems out of breath. XDDDDDDDDD
11) Great song
12) OMG... FF10 song!!! Love it so much!!! hmm... your voice is a bit low at the beginning.. can't really hear the words.
13) Great song

Well, about your PM, let me think about it

[ChrisKay]

thanks Furri.




Oh, I'll be looking forward to hear from you soon.