the chronicles of Lecona-Nui, my first book!

hi everyone. in honor of my b day i wote this book. hope you like it!

wedd

The chronicles of
Lecona Nui

Chapter 1
Truraga Levakane walked though the maze of tunnels with his Le Matoran guard, Penanto. Both knew that they could not stop until they reached the settlement. For, although the Turaga of Stone knew the caves better than anybody else on the island, they were filled with danger. Recently they had met a lone ash bear, which had been driven off by Penanto. The Le Matoran was the first to break the silence. “ We have been travel-walking for hours now. Are you sure that this is the right way-path?” he asked nervously. “All this time and no sign of bright-light. Remind me why we had to go this way?” The wise Turaga sighed. “For the fifth time, Penanto. We go this way because it has less danger.”
“Oh yes, we only encountered-fought a Nui-Rama swarm, an ash bear, and five Nui-Jaga. What next?” said the Le-Matoran, making no attempt to hide his sarcasm. “Them.” Said Levakane. In the distance, both could hear the sound of tramping feet. “Fire creatures?” asked Penanto, panic in his voice. “Yes. Get down.” Levakane slammed the Matoran down, at the same time calling upon his Noble Matatu. Sand started to blow over them as the Fire Creatures marched into the tunnel. “Stop here.” A harsh and ragged voice commanded. The sound of tramping feet stopped. “Which way?” asked another voice. “Right.” The first voice said.
“Why right? Left seems just as-” the second voice asked. A third voice cut him off, saying, “Don’t question your commander, Vortag! Once we have the Matoran enslaved and the Turaga killed, we will rule the island! Now onward to the fortress!” the sound of tramping feet started again. Once the sound had faded into the background, Levakane got up. “Mata-Nui! We have to warn the settlement! Hurry, Penanto!” He started toward a side tunnel. Penanto hurried after him. After another hour or so, they reatched a ceiling hatch. The Turaga climbed a series of rungs embedded in the wall, and opened the hatch. Finally! Daylight! The Turaga of Stone and the Le-Matoran didn’t have long to enjoy the sunlight though. They hurried to a big building.
*****

Watona, captain of the Ga-Matoran guard, was with Turaga Tarduna. “Now, if the Fire Creatures attack from this direction we will be able to hold them off just fine. But, if they attack from this direction, then we’ll be in trouble, because there is a hill, in which they can have momentum. Now what I would suggest is that we put madu fruit in the hill and attach a cable in which the elemental power can go though.” She said, pointing on the blueprint to were she meant. Tarduna nodded. “That is a good plan, Watona. I see I made a good choice when I chose captains. But may I suggest that…” Suddenly the door burst open. He turned to see Turaga Levakane and Penanto. “Levakane! It’s good to see you. We were just going over battle plans.” Then, seeing their anxious faces, he asked, “There’s nothing wrong is there? No bad news?”
“The worst. The Fire Creatures are lunching an attack here. They plan to kill you and I, and enslave the Matoran.” Levakane said. “How do you know this?” asked Watona. “We met a troop of them on the way-path here. They stopped at a split-fork in the road. We hid in the sand.” Said Penanto. “This is serious. I must warn the others.” Said the Turaga of Fire. He went to a big red button. He grabbed a microphone and pushed the button. “The Fire Creatures are going to invade soon! Everybody to their posts!” they all went out. Matoran were rushing here and there, and to big launchers. Soon everybody was all in position. They waited silently. An hour went by, than another. Penanto started to hope that the Fire Creatures had gotten lost in the Spider’s Maze. Then he heard the steady tramp. The war had begun.

This post has been edited by weddragon on Aug 16 2007, 09:23 AM

sorry about this, this part of the forum is for the official Bionicle books, so I'll move this topic to the fan-made story part (and happy B-day!)

EDIT there seems a problem with the moving, so I'll put it here for now

This post has been edited by Darth Bionics on Aug 15 2007, 09:37 AM

alright thanks. and if you want to reply, i'll put up a link for replying. as soon as i figur out how ...



wedd

EDIT: if its ok i'll go ahead and post the second chapter. i'm going to wait untill you OK that i can.


wedd

This post has been edited by weddragon on Aug 15 2007, 11:32 AM

alright thanks. and if you want to reply, i'll put up a link for replying. as soon as i figur out how ...



wedd

EDIT: if its ok i'll go ahead and post the second chapter. i'm going to wait untill you OK that i can.


wedd

people can reply in this topic and yes, you can make more, I just need to fix some software issues but you can still post in the mean time

thanks and here it is:

Chapter 2
Watona took a deep breath. Her heartlight was flashing rapidly. She had just come back from planting the madu fruit, in time to hear the heavy footsteps. Watona loaded her Canor blaster, a simple but effective weapon, which fired energy spheres. Then, it started to rain.
Great, she thought. Just what we need. Just then a bolt of lighting streaked across the sky, illuminating the plain below. Watona gasped. There were at least one hundred fire creatures. One hundred of them, fifty of us. We can’t do this alone. She thought, desperately. Turaga Tarduna approached her. “I need you to go to the village and get some more Matoran. Make haste!” he said. Watona nodded. She hurried to her levitation bike, a board with handles, fitted with levitation disks. She started it. It hummed and rose into the air. Watona sped away.
****
Vortag saw the Ga-Matoran fly away. Turning to two guards, he said “After her.”
They got on their own levitation bikes and went after Watona.
****
Penanto saw two Fire Creatures get on levitation bikes and go after Watona. “Mata-Nui watch-protect her.” He breathed.
“She’ll deep-need it.”
****
Watona saw what was chasing her. She put all the power she could into the bike. Still they were gaining. The Fire Creatures opened fire with Canor blasters. One bolt hit the bike, instantly destroying the levitation disk inside. Ga-Matoran and bike angled down toward the ground. This is going to hurt. She thought, closing her eyes tight. As it turned out, closing her eyes didn’t do anything to stop her. A second later she hit the ground hard.
****
The Fire Creatures watched the crash from above. Satisfied, they turned tail, and went back to the battle. They didn’t know how well Ga-Matoran tend to survive things…


wedd

EDIT: i just posted now and i saw how short it is. hopefully, the future chapters will be longer.


wedd

This post has been edited by weddragon on Aug 17 2007, 10:23 AM

Very... interesting. Good names, and use of characters. I'd probably give it a 9/10.