Title: Challenge Set 2: Round 1 RESULTS
Description: Sorry for the wait!
Believer503 - July 25, 2006 04:53 AM (GMT)
The scoring is as follows. Each poem had a maximum amount of 40 possible points, 10 points each for Storyline, Meaning, Diction, Form (Iambic pentameter, etc.)
Since we're so late in posting these results, the poems are curved somewhat. The best in the categories received 10's and everyone else is bumped up the difference.
Example: Best score = 8 means that everyone gets a score boost of 2 pts for that category.
Vy & Yvescion: 39/40
Affa and Mon: 34/40
xChelly and Angellina: 36/40
Criz and Chelvy 35/40
These points, like the last challenge set, will accumulate throughout the set. In the end, there will be a special challenge where you can bet a number of points that will pay 1:1 if you pass =).
Vy and Yvescion
Through leaves of green on mystic island far
Eyes widened ‘cross the water gentle mere
My gaping found in closet lips’ memoir
A “ling” for union ring showed my love dear
Short-lived my dream of blissful wedding wife
The spell of moon forgot of heartfelt age
Her coldness well intended lulled this strife
As each turned way to turn a separate page
Our love too strong, apart we could not stay
Our baby born but Bai Yue came to part
The lives, for us, that lost, our friends were they
With them we won Bai Yue with love’s true art
But senseless fate unkind from me took her
Her mom, my love, my heart, my sweet Ling’er
Affa and Mon
She was Zhao Ling Er.
Whose world was innocent in her thought,
Till Xiao Yao met her,
Who came to find the medicine he sought.
As their love grows stronger,
Fate starts to play its game.
Time after time pulling them further,
But their love stays the same.
With each battle they grow stronger,
No longer the youth they once were,
And each day they grow further,
But he keeps fighting for her.
Together they put Ba Yue to a stand,
As they meet fate's cruel hand.
xChelly and Angellina
A coincidental meet for the two,
Neither expected or had they realized,
The amount of challenges to go through,
As a true couple they dipped for a dive,
Only to lose each other halfway through,
Their misery never ever leaving.
They despaired as the storms and winds had brew,
Yet their strong love never ever weaving.
Till then he had found one more girl for him,
While she attempted to give up then,
To realise her love for him would not dim,
Tears littered the ground as she cried as then,
Not knowing the bitterness he had felt,
Without her, without them as a couple,
As another loss of love he had dealt,
Etched in his mind her smile and her dimples.
Right in his life his two true love had came,
One left and their baby etched with “her” name.
Criz and Chelvy
Let no more be grieved, what they have done,
Gods are looking, that do we fear.
Hold both our hands, together we will run,
But leaving you behind, do I tear.
Chances are lost, but there is fate,
Lovebirds do sing, still after youth.
If feelings exist, then it’s never late,
To behold the worth of our love’s truth.
Love alters not in the brief a hundred days,
It is an ever-fixed mark that’s never shaken.
Our teardrops dry after countless ways,
To keep us together and you not taken.
Yet to future in hope our love shall stand,
To prove Love’s not Time’s fool, despite god’s cruel hand.
Ramen - July 25, 2006 05:55 AM (GMT)
OMG... Vy and Yvescion one sounds so sophisticated! U guys really deserve the extra marks to be the leading group so far. Very well done!! (1 mark off perfection.. geez!)
The others are as good. I reckon u guys hv done really good job. I can't even make one myself so really well done guyss...
Affa and Mon team really surprises me to be the last one from the other groups in this round, since Mon's an extension english student lol I thought u guys would be the first >.<
lol.. well.. I guess I just have to expect the unexpected from the challenge lols
affa - July 25, 2006 08:32 AM (GMT)
~Sw33tz~ - July 25, 2006 10:50 AM (GMT)
no affa... ur NOT kicked out...
ramen the only reason it wasn't from the sophistcated mon was coz mon's computer wasn't connected then... so it was ALL affa's work... so congrats affa on such a high score BY UR SELF....
(did teddy know? affa, apply for misadventure=P)
yanyan - July 25, 2006 08:59 PM (GMT)
oh really, affa did it by himself. I had no idea. Mabye we should curve their's more.
tuyet - July 25, 2006 10:21 PM (GMT)
snifff!!! reading those make me cry again!!!! good jobs for everyone!!!! Because i can't make one!!!
- † - - July 25, 2006 11:06 PM (GMT)
Yeah lolz ... Affa did it all by himself ... sorry ... lolz ... I had a poem written on my comp but I couldn't go online in the holz so yeah ... apologies folks ... my internet application thingo went out yesterday so I should get in next month ... -.-"
Ramen - July 26, 2006 06:22 AM (GMT)
Oohh. then Affa's application for misadventure should be accepted... so he could be IN the next round mwahahhaa..... *evil laugh*
ps: but it's a pretty good attempt Affa... *pat pat* (hope this line would be enuff to rebuild affa's wounded self-esteem for being the last grp =p )
Criz - July 28, 2006 04:12 AM (GMT)
lOl...i guess monnie will have to do the next challenge XD
spazgal420 - July 29, 2006 05:02 AM (GMT)
Wow all these poems are so good! whew I'm glad I was on vacation and not in this challenge because poems are NOT my thing at all!
sleepyanimeboi - July 31, 2006 04:06 PM (GMT)
these poems are good :D for some reason i like affa and supposedly mon's poem more... idk why XD but they were all good :P
- † - - August 2, 2006 01:58 AM (GMT)
Lolz ... gee thanks Criz ... -.-" ... you know I can't draw or make comics ...
Hmmmmm ... I thought Affa's was really easy to understand, the others were SO sophisticated lolz ... -.-" ... the one I wrote was pretty simple too lolz ... I spent one hour on it!! XP