Comments for stories before and after J, S and C

Here we go Rimara Nui, enjoy.

This post has been edited by Kokua aviatrix on Feb 22 2012, 07:54 PM

Victory. (BTW, I'm Ria just incase you didn't realise with the name change.)

Edit: Finished reading. I really like Aikane as a character.

This post has been edited by Rimara Nui on Aug 21 2011, 04:13 PM

Thanks, she's turned out pretty well. Here we go with the second story.

I'm seeing a distinct progression in ability throughout "the Unique Kraata," and while I feel this progresses into "aIJoMN" (gonna' have to abbreviate that) I can't really place what I think has improved between them.

For instance, at the start of "the Unique Kraata" there's a kind of unquestioning approach to travel around Mata Nui, while (understandably) there's more purpose and in some cases hesitation further on, which might have been appropriate to Sherrie nearer the beginning. From what I can see of "aIJoMN," the transitions seem more... justified?

Anyway, looking forward to more, and I don't think this observation really needs to be taken to heart, seeing as it's been sorted in your newer stories.

*smiles enigmatically* wait until you see the next story.

Next story's begun.

Just wondering Kokua. (I just got started reading the first post/section on your J,S, and C story) Is ok, you can format it and publish it into google docs? I want to print and read your story outloud (yes outloud. It just makes stories more epic that way) on paper, not on monitor (the light strains my eyes when starring at it too long).

Also, is the J, S, and C story completely finished or is it still in the work in progress?

Er I have no idea how to do that. I'm not that computer savvy. But wow, reading it aloud, I'm deeply flattered you do that, and I know what you mean about reading from a moniter.

J,C and S is now finished, I hadn't realized there'd been a glitch in things as my dongle signal does tend to get stroppy at times.

This post has been edited by Kokua aviatrix on Mar 3 2012, 12:15 AM

You could just select it all, copy/paste it into a word processing document and print that instead. Is there any reason why it has to be Google docs?

More convenient printing I guess. :/ But I guess I could copy and paste it into a word doc, and do that too.

edit:
Ok finished copying and pasting it onto a word doc. Its about 130 pages with the smallest margins!

Ha! I'm just going to use the school's printer to print out this! Good thing printing is free! I just have to make it less obvious that I am printing 130 pages! Like printing 20 to 30 pages every so often in the lab.

Kokua I could send you the file attachment if you want to look at it on a doc. I don't know how to do it through the forums though.

edit:
Yes! I managed to print double sided - 130 pages without getting caught from the computer lab assistant!

This post has been edited by Matoro on Mar 5 2012, 05:05 AM