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Solek-Toa of Shadows	Posted: Feb 8 2011, 02:29 AM
Toa of Shadows Group: Members Posts: 871 Member No.: 134 Joined: 14-November 10	Is lock a Le-Matoran? Or is he Matau,Lewa, or Takua just that he doesn't know it?

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Feb 8 2011, 07:19 AM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	Hes a Le-Matoran.

Solek-Toa of Shadows	Posted: Feb 8 2011, 04:17 PM
Toa of Shadows Group: Members Posts: 871 Member No.: 134 Joined: 14-November 10	figures.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Feb 15 2011, 01:43 AM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	A new part of my story is out! Just a warning, it may seem weird but I couldn't think of another way to have it happen.

Solek-Toa of Shadows	Posted: Feb 15 2011, 02:46 AM
Toa of Shadows Group: Members Posts: 871 Member No.: 134 Joined: 14-November 10	It's... interesting. The part of "I can do this all day." made me laugh. All in all, it's a good albiet not great part.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Feb 15 2011, 06:44 AM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	Yeah I laughed when I wrote it. Thanks.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Mar 8 2011, 07:43 PM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	Part twelve is out, I know its a day late but I forgot yesterday.

Solek-Toa of Shadows	Posted: Mar 10 2011, 02:42 PM
Toa of Shadows Group: Members Posts: 871 Member No.: 134 Joined: 14-November 10	Sorry for the late review, Iro's epic got in the way, so I didn't know that you put up any new parts, I just read both of the last two parts, and I must say that the firstt of the two were good, and slightly earie, though I think most Epics should have at least one earie moment. The second, well it lacks a little something that I can't think of yet.

Iro the Dude

Posted: Mar 10 2011, 09:18 PM

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QUOTE (Solek-Toa of Shadows @ Mar 10 2011, 06:42 AM)

Sorry for the late review, Iro's epic got in the way, so I didn't know that you put up any new parts, I just read both of the last two parts, and I must say that the firstt of the two were good, and slightly earie, though I think most Epics should have at least one earie moment. The second, well it lacks a little something that I can't think of yet.

Out of curiosity, how would my epic "get in the way"? Couldn't you check the dates of the last posts in Yurik's epics, and then see that he had recent updates? His last one was also up for a while before my latest chapter was posted, so please, explain that to me.

Takal

Posted: Mar 10 2011, 09:45 PM

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QUOTE (Iro the Dude @ Mar 10 2011, 09:18 PM)

QUOTE (Solek-Toa of Shadows @ Mar 10 2011, 06:42 AM)

I'm having some trouble understanding that, too. It doesn't take much vigilance to spot three topics having been updated.

And as much as Lock used to have some comedic value, he's treaded over the line between "mildly laughable" and "over-the-top." You may want to restrain him a little.

Solek-Toa of Shadows	Posted: Mar 11 2011, 02:11 AM
Toa of Shadows Group: Members Posts: 871 Member No.: 134 Joined: 14-November 10	I meant that I only saw that you're epic was at the top, sorry about that, I didn't notice his when I started working on my own again, so sorry if I sounded a little rude.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Mar 15 2011, 07:58 PM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	New part is up. A day late again I know, but I forgot yesterday somehow.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Mar 22 2011, 05:21 PM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	O_O This is becoming a thing, me forgetting on Monday. Oh well. New part is up!

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Mar 29 2011, 06:21 PM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	It has officially become a thing. xD New part is up, a day late like usual.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Apr 4 2011, 03:36 PM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	New part is up. And for the first time in a long time its on time!

Solek-Toa of Shadows	Posted: Apr 5 2011, 03:23 AM
Toa of Shadows Group: Members Posts: 871 Member No.: 134 Joined: 14-November 10	Sorry for being slow on the reading, but I'm not done yet, but so far, so good.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Apr 5 2011, 06:21 AM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	Thanks! =D

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Apr 11 2011, 04:45 PM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	New part is out! And its on time too.

Solek-Toa of Shadows

Posted: Apr 15 2011, 04:34 AM

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�End of discussion.�

Always works

And let me guess, the yellow bieng is you from the future right? I'm guessing yes.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Apr 15 2011, 05:22 AM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	Well since I've sorta given up on the story, I can tell you yes he is Yurikk from the future, was it really that obvious?

Takal	Posted: Apr 15 2011, 11:22 AM
Toa of Thunder Group: Forum Administrator Posts: 1,641 Member No.: 11 Joined: 22-July 09	Unfortunately, yes. There are very few yellow characters, and as for character who can genuinely tell the future...? You've only really given him one possible identity.

Toa Yurikk	Posted: Apr 15 2011, 02:40 PM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	Actually theres five yellow characters. They just haven't been shown yet.

Takal	Posted: Apr 15 2011, 04:09 PM
Toa of Thunder Group: Forum Administrator Posts: 1,641 Member No.: 11 Joined: 22-July 09	Well, we didn't know that before, did we? And now that you've told us that it is Yurikk...

comicboy15	Posted: May 20 2011, 07:32 PM
Toa of Psychics Group: Members Posts: 86 Member No.: 179 Joined: 19-May 11	Loved your story, bro! This toa Yurrik is pretty boss! As for what I've been reading about BZPower, it's not that great. Trust me, I tried and it's kinda dissapointing. Forums of Destiny is where it's at! You should check out my mini-forums at my site! BIONICFourms

Toa Yurikk	Posted: May 20 2011, 11:04 PM
Toa of destiny! Group: Members Posts: 693 Member No.: 119 Joined: 10-September 10	Thanks glad you liked my story.

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