coments for New Toa New destiny, what do you think?

if you mean the finnal battle for Metru-Nui, yeah.

Oh yeah I read it, nice Bohrok cannons. xD

I thought it said catapult...

Oh yeah catapult. Still awesome though.

Read your next part! It was cool! But I was wondering, which of the Toa Nui has the Olmak?

Valeia, the only masks that has telportation powers are Olmaks, and I thought that I mentioned earlier on in the story that she had an Olmak.

But the model has a Miru.

The masks don't have to look like the ones made, one of the Toa Hagah (Norik) has a mask that looks like a mask of regeneration, but it's not.

Yeah I guess.

Will we be seeing any journeys of self discovery? I find they add a decent point or moral to a story.

I don't know, currently their all in a hectic place, considering its find or be found, and it's probably better to choose the first option than the last.

I read the newest part. I liked the battle, it was cool.

Thanks! Takal hasn't been posting much anywhere...

He posts all the time!

Excuse me?

I just don't feel like repeating myself. When I think of something constructive (and new) to say, I'll say it.

Thanks for explaining things, oh I'm not going to do a part today, day off.

This post has been edited by Solek-Toa of Shadows on Dec 31 2010, 06:48 PM

Hey Solek! Read your latest part. Liked it, one thing though, I suggest that every time you end a sentence with a period also start a new line.
Like this.
It makes it WAY easier to read.

Paragraph breaks are used to separate different topics and speakers, not different sentences. However, you do need to start new paragraphs when people speak. Besides that, I think it was a good ending, if a little rushed.

Thanks guys! Don't worry about it being over, the sequel will come tommorrow.

Couple of pointers: generally, we all start a new topic for new stories, and Turaga of plasma (as well as Toa and Matoran) are male, so they don't need to explain themselves.Nuara's just a freak of nature.

Read the new story, its great!

Two things though: a Matoran of water can't become a Toa of light, not even if they're destined to. Sorry.

And no being could beat Lariska easily, she is amazing at fighting, they would have to be impossibly powerful.

I say you might want to have Teala be a Matoran of light like Takua was.

actually, energized protodermis is supposed to mutate, making her change her element, and no Takal, I did not steal your idea, I had this idea for a while, before I read your epic.

I never accused you of stealing my ideas. I just said a Turaga of plasma wouldn't have to explain why he was male. Male + Plasma = Natural.
Besides, Thunder is a rewrite of Takal, which I wrote in 07-08.

I'm not accusing you of accusing me, I just didn't want you to think that I'm a plagurizer, oh and I just wanted to have them linked together, this is my longest part yet.

Who doesn't have mutant Toa? I'm not the first to play that card, and I won't be the last.

Isn't it funny how prophecies work out sometimes?

It's pretty hard to fight someone you can't see or hear, or use any machine to track, and you generally don't wan't to move when you have a blade at your neck, Solek did everything that I listed, if he hadn't... well, he'd be going easy on you.

I did two new parts, Enjoy!

No being could randomly stumble on the Order of Mata Nui base, and if they did, they would be killed to keep the location a secret.

Or be held captive until the Order 'go public' again (like in the Destiny War). I don't think killing Toa is Helryx' style, but neither is handing out secrets.