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 The Azure Knight's Comics, Boredum strikes again.
The Azure Knight
Posted: Aug 14 2009, 07:48 PM


Matoran


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Welcome to my comis, yadayadayada... PGS's and GS's PM me, blah blah blah, on with the comics!

The Comics
I hate random

Yeah, you can be a PGS or GS if you like, just send me an RZ sheet of yourself. Plus, dont just look and leave, I would rather know what people think than try and read their minds.
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new-deimos
Posted: Aug 18 2009, 04:03 PM


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bravo monsieur.

i'd say it's got the consistancy of a "Garfield" comic strip:



crude, yet uncannily satisfying.

This post has been edited by new-deimos on Aug 18 2009, 04:06 PM
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The Azure Knight
Posted: Aug 18 2009, 05:04 PM


Matoran


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Garfield... I have never read another to do with Garfield, so I wouldnt know.
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Click23
Posted: Aug 21 2009, 07:44 PM


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Pretty good, I like the part,"If you slow down it won't hurt as much!" That was funny. I'll have to see a couple more of your comics to determine if I really like them or not. wink.gif

-Click23
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Luke
Posted: Aug 23 2009, 06:50 PM


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QUOTE (Click23 @ Aug 21 2009, 02:44 PM)
Pretty good, I like the part,"If you slow down it won't hurt as much!" That was funny. I'll have to see a couple more of your comics to determine if I really like them or not. wink.gif

-Click23

Same here.

I think the Garfield thing was a pretty good compliment seeing as how long Garfield has been around.
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hoorj
Posted: Sep 22 2009, 04:49 PM


Matoran


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I'd say the sprite comic needs work,

Do you have ROMs and an emulator? Because then you can use backdrops taken from videogames. Those poor 2-D sprites look so miserable and out-of-place in that backdrop- too much lensflare. Try the backdrops from old SNES games or GBA games.


It looks more like the dude shrunk between panels two and three. Yes, I know it's supposed to be a zoomout- but it doesn't look like one. You should have removed the sun in panels one and two.

Also the panels are too same-looking and too close to each other. Try to fix that or else people will lose track of where they are while reading your comic, get frustrated, and then switch over to some smex/cheescake/romancedrama comic with animals in it.
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