Onua Mata

I edited this post because many of those who read it didn't really like it. So starting out i'll begin with the box. While not really that different from any other canister, the 2001 toa canisters have the ability of sliding the thin plastic cover to reveal the other toa scenes annd mask codes. next i'll talk about the parts. first the large clawed hands are in black. this is significant because up to date it has only been in that color in that set(i think. if i'm wrong than post one that has the piece). Next the mask is (as they all are) quite interesting. I have thought of(and many times heard it described) as a skull or a charred skull. lastly the green membrain is a rare piece have only appeared on Tehuti. finally on to the set. the gear mechanism is particular to his figure which is to me rather cool. he has a bit of a squat look from his head being placed in the mid upper stomach area as upposed to the other characters who have a ball piece where his head is placed. well thats a wrap. Like it? Don't like it? post your comments here!
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This post has been edited by Onua39 on Feb 3 2013, 12:43 PM

You can still post pictures on here. Upload pictures onto brickshelf.com and then add in the URL img code in your post of the picture you would like to present to MoD. Make sure the image size isn't too big.

This post has been edited by Matoro on Feb 1 2013, 01:35 AM

Thanks, however i think my having an 18 year old computer has something to do with it.

This post has been edited by Onua39 on Feb 3 2013, 12:43 PM

Sorry to say this but it's the worst review I've ever read. The lack of photos is justifiable but there are only about three lines of text with glaring spelling errors.

As i did it all i could think was "this will be horrible!" personally i'm not good at this type of stuff.

This post has been edited by Onua39 on Feb 3 2013, 12:43 PM

Then why'd you do it in the first place?

Then why'd you do it in the first place?

Not really sure.

This post has been edited by Onua39 on Feb 3 2013, 12:44 PM

Don't stop writing reviews, just try to make them better.

Yeah i will. Oh yeah, have any advice?

This post has been edited by Onua39 on Feb 3 2013, 12:44 PM

Write more than three lines of text. Dividing your review into sections like 'box', 'instruction', 'parts', 'build' etc. is also a good idea if done right.

wait a sec i don't remember, though i have edited the reveiw after your suggestion.

This post has been edited by Onua39 on Feb 3 2013, 12:44 PM

The review is a bit better now but still needs some work.

And spelling mistakes are still there.

This post has been edited by Ninja on Feb 3 2013, 12:27 PM

Hey i think that i got the spelling right.

'I' should be capitalized, the name of the Onu-Matoran mentioned in the review is spelled 'Tehutti' and the word 'membrain' doesn't exist unless it's some kind of fan nickname for that piece.

Yeah it is a fan named piece for the transparent "brain" looking piece. I've called it that as long as i have been a BIONICLE fan