Yeah, you can be a PGS or GS if you like, just send me an RZ sheet of yourself. Plus, dont just look and leave, I would rather know what people think than try and read their minds.
new-deimos - August 18, 2009 04:03 PM (GMT)
bravo monsieur.
i'd say it's got the consistancy of a "Garfield" comic strip:
crude, yet uncannily satisfying.
The Azure Knight - August 18, 2009 05:04 PM (GMT)
Garfield... I have never read another to do with Garfield, so I wouldnt know.
Click23 - August 21, 2009 07:44 PM (GMT)
Pretty good, I like the part,"If you slow down it won't hurt as much!" That was funny. I'll have to see a couple more of your comics to determine if I really like them or not. ;)
-Click23
Luke - August 23, 2009 06:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Click23 @ Aug 21 2009, 02:44 PM)
Pretty good, I like the part,"If you slow down it won't hurt as much!" That was funny. I'll have to see a couple more of your comics to determine if I really like them or not. ;)
-Click23
Same here.
I think the Garfield thing was a pretty good compliment seeing as how long Garfield has been around.
hoorj - September 22, 2009 04:49 PM (GMT)
I'd say the sprite comic needs work,
Do you have ROMs and an emulator? Because then you can use backdrops taken from videogames. Those poor 2-D sprites look so miserable and out-of-place in that backdrop- too much lensflare. Try the backdrops from old SNES games or GBA games.
It looks more like the dude shrunk between panels two and three. Yes, I know it's supposed to be a zoomout- but it doesn't look like one. You should have removed the sun in panels one and two.
Also the panels are too same-looking and too close to each other. Try to fix that or else people will lose track of where they are while reading your comic, get frustrated, and then switch over to some smex/cheescake/romancedrama comic with animals in it.
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