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HearMeCalling
Posted: Sep 30 2009, 06:31 AM


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I can see why you don't like it, and I agree, it's definitely not your best. It's very confusing and I didn't really get what was going on. It's still beautifully written though, I love your style of writing even though I didn't like the style of the piece much. Wow, I'm being harsh this morning. :lol: I'm sorry. :(

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She could barely see him through the cracks, a massive group of lines resembling a spiders web.


I love that sentence. There's something very evocative in it.
Miss Peg
Posted: Oct 1 2009, 04:58 PM


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LOL, nah, it's all constructive. I understand the confusion, though in defence of that the character is confused too. :lol: It was a riskier one-shot, I'm not used to doing off the usual type stories, so they usually fail. Lol.
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Posted: Oct 1 2009, 05:29 PM


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:lol: Trying is good. Some experiments work. Some fail dismally.
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