I love getting feedback from people so let me have it!
Tell me the good, the bad and the things that need to be worked on please!
LOL seriously though.
That was pretty sharp for someone who's been on a wee hiatus. You've really improved over some of the issues Lola had before as well. Work on the subtlety of putting over your match / opponent a little more and LO'N will be a beast. =D
I liked it, you got straight to the point on who Lola is (I loved the "I'm short by my fuse is shorter" line!) as well as putting over Exotica and the match being two debutees.
Looking forward to seeing more :)