Okay feeling good I was finally able to finish my second roleplay it too is under the character development forum please read and let me know how you like it. Also if anyone has any ideas or thinks it would be good to use our characters in a roleplay let me know I am up to any ideas. Thanks

Amber

I really liked your second roleplay, I've always been a sucker for that length introspective stuff where you get a real essence of the character you are trying to put across. Good stuff :)

Your dialogue is good, can't complain about that. The most important part of character development is letting us know what's going on inside of their heads with the dialogue too. Tell me if that doesnt make sense.

I hope you guys both stay here for awhile and develop your skills though, there's great potential. Just ask our world champ what hanging here does for a year