Ryuu, Dragon Ki (White/Blue)

Player's Information:

Name:Josh
Nickname:Josh What name would you prefer to be called as?
Age:19 Exact age.
Status:Member
ContactInfo:air_guy@hotmail.co.uk
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Name:Ryuu
Gender:Male
Age:9000
Race:DragonKin(White/BlueMix)


Abilities:Abilities of his mother and father. Has the powers of the white dragons, Snow and Ice, and the powers of the blue dragons, water and clouds. Due to his age he has mastered theses powers and is formidable in battle using his experience over younger more powerful dragons particularly dragon lords. Due to the nature of his powers he tends to fight over a body of water. I

*Weapons:In his human form he carries an ancient sword and a walking stick.

Character Descriptions

Hair:Shoulder length and completely white. It hangs past his shoulders.
Eyes:White.
Height:5'11
Weight:111lbs

Length:113 foot from nose to tail
Weight:1000lbs
Skin:A very light white with tinges of blue, has often been mistaken for a silver Dragon.

*Other Visible Features: Many battle scars across his human and draco form(s)

Description:

In his human for he appears as an old man, aged approximately seventy, he has also developed arthiritas in his human form unlike his dragon form which has grown in power over the years. His hair is a light Grey color and falls to his shoulders. It is thinning and is often tattered and messy. He also styles a grey beard In his human and draco form which has the same attributes as his hair. His eyes are white and when he meets a human they often believe him to be blind. He has many wrinkels and is very slow in his human form.

In his Drakos form he is far more powerful than in his human form. As in all Dragon Kin his Drakos form differs to that of others. His own gives him a velvet like skin that is white and blue. He sprouts to horns on his head and down his back. He is faster and stronger than his human form and even has wings.

His Dragon form, his true form. Is a sight to behold. He is one of the oldest and therefor one of the largest dragons left in existence. He is now 113ft from head to toe and stands over sixty feet tall. His scales are, almost, silver due to his mixed lineage. He has spikes running down his body to his tail. His wings are translucent and span forty feet.In this form he is at his most powerful. Capable of holding his own against any one and anything alive.



Personality:

His mixed lineage give him a most original personality. He takes most of it from the water dragon in him. He likes to be free and his mood is ever changing. One minute he could be talking happily the next attacking a Magi. He hates Magi. They ruined his life. They stripped him of everything he loved and if he ever smelt ones foul stench in the air he vowed he would end its miserable existence. Though to his fellow Dragon's he seems cool and calculated but the truth is he is very much like a red dragon. His temper is terrible and can be triggered by the smallest thing.

When in his human form he likes to travel. He has nothing against humans who do not hunt his kind and often travels to their lands and acts as a story teller.


Occupation:H travels allot. And often acts as a story teller. He is also a teacher to younger dragons and happily passes on his knowledge.

Avatar:Ian Mckellen, specificity as Gandlaf the Grey.

History:

He was born so long ago. He was alive when the Dragons and humans lived in peace and the lived with the beast kin. His mother was a renowned teacher and showed many humans how to tap into their gifts. She also passed on her talents to the younger Dragons of her era. It was during a solar eclipse that she met a young white dragon. They met in their human form and fell deeply in love. Soon after they ha given birth to a son who they named Ryuu. His name means Dragon spirit and he takes his name very seriously.

He was there when the Magi attacked. His mother was flying and landed for a drink of water when she spotted who she used to consider friends. She did not bat and eyelid and let them greet her. But before she knew it they had attacked her with everything they had. Swords, Spears and arrows stuck out of his mother. Her scream filled the air. His father heard it and came to save his love. He killed every Magi freezing them all with one breath and them shattering them to pieces with his tail. However he ha came to late to saver her. He took Ryuu and flew south. Eventually they came across a large continent free of humans. They were one of the first to arrive. But each day more of their kind flew to join them until hundreds of Dragons found refuge.

Each Dragon had their own opinion to what should be done. Many red Dragons called out for war. They said no one could hope to stand against an army of Dragons. The green Dragons were against the war, saying Nature would suffer greatly. Eventually the agreed they would not fight the humans and would make a new life for themselves on their new island, but they all knew someday the Magi would come.

At first Ryuu was unable to control water. His father taught his everything he knew and from a young age he was known as a prodigy among the Dragons but his father knew to become whole he must learn to control another part of his life. He sent him to a small island just off the main land. Many water Dragons had made their home there. He was taught by the oldest living Dragon and soon mastered it. He soon found how much he loved the sea and decided to stay on the island.

When he aged he decided he wanted to see the world. He wanted to see if the Humans where all as evil as the Magi. He flew north to find out. He traveled from village to village in his human form, though it was much younger then, telling stories of Dragons and Adventure. He found that many people wanted Dragons to return. After he had been traveling for a few decades he heard a shot in the woods. He followed it and saw a woman was being attacked by men with swords and weapons. He went into his Drakos form and slew them all with his sword and claws. He smelt the air and relaised she was of his Kin.

She had no idea she was a Dragon and had created fire out of nowhere. He began to tutor her on her new powers. She was the same age as he and they fell in love. He-always found it strange at how long it took her powers to manifest. Eventually they had a child together. Armen. A cross between a Water and Fire Dragon. They moved to the south where their son would be safe. However his wife wanted to show their son her old life and they flew back. When they reached there they were attacked by three dozen men. They held them off and for a while it looked hopeful. But his love died as did his son. Ryuu went into a fit of rage and flew out to see. He used every ounce of his strength to create a gigantic wave. He flew ahead of it and killed them all. The woman and children to. He has always regretted that day. He flew back to his home land. Where he taught others to use their gifts.


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Example RP:Time took its toll and her boredom had taken it's hold of her. She had spent the last hours holed up in her room, pouring over texts and books on any which subject, trying to inform herself of things he didn't know, and hadn't been allowed to know before. 

Any scrap of information was processed and devoured, sating that natural instinct to study, examine, and simply know. She had been doing it for hours, perhaps days if she counted the week that had gone by. She rubbed her face with one hand and set the text aside looking around the still bare room. It held meager possessions, what few things she owned, which amounted to almost nothing. The furniture consisted of a bed, wardrobe, night-stand and desk, which she was currently sitting at. 

She should probably do something else, let her mind free of the load she had put on it. She ducked into the small bathroom attached to the room she had been given, pulling her hair back into a low ponytail with quick hands. It seconds cold water hit her face and shocked out out of the lethargy she had fallen into. It certainly woke her up, and she inhaled deeply before drying her face. he'd go for a walk, yes, just a walk.

She pulled sandals on, not bothering to change out of the simple tan skirt and white blouse that was one of the only articles of clothing she had. She hadn't gathered enough confidence to actually buy anything, feeling out of place with belongings.

Her feet carried her out of the room and down the hall, soft echoes of the soles of her shoes hitting the stone floor echoing up and down the corridor. Bright eyes gazed half in reality, and half in a day dream, letting whatever feeling that sprung upon her guide her path. It hadn't been that long since she had joined this place, acquired a new 'family' as she put it. They weren't very close, but there had to be some thread of loyalty around them all, to the cause, whatever that may be, that connected them. Dove turned a corner, not paying much attention where she was headed. The morning air was crisp, and she she headed outside, a light fog, mist even, was gathered along the grounds. 

It was grey, and not very beautiful of a view, but it was a change. She had yet to explore practically anything, focused o what her responsibilities now would be, and the situation she found herself in. Still, all of the stress was worth it for this freedom, for the chance to walk where she pleased, not hindering on the beck and call of anyone. It made her giddy, and excited, but all she could do was smile and continue her walk.

The hills of Ruusan could be seen in the distance, mountains looming a ways off, and morning dew clung to her feet and ankles. A small laugh escaped her throat, she could do almost anything now, she didn't have to worry about things like contracts, or fear of the whip. She almost wished she had unbound the wings that folded into her back, kept hidden from people's view. Just another eccentricity that was a part of her breeding. 

If she wanted, Dove figured she could simply lay out, and waste the day away enjoying the outdoors, no need for work, or stress. And so she did. A patch of grass, a little bit from the path, was her chosen spot and she sat, watched the swirling fog as it moved around her. With a content sigh she reclined into the dew-laden grass, not caring of the wetness, or the fact that she was idling away. For once she just wanted to enjoy herself, and not think about anything.

Her eyes closed and she folded her hands over her stomach.

It was a good start.

Ok m'dear, time for a wee bit of feedback.

First, and tiny, is that his weight in human form is far too little for his height. If you have any doubts look up a height-weight chart online to find out a more realistic weight.

For a second item on the list you need to be reeeeally careful about including board history in your application without checking with the admins first. It saves us having to correct you and it saves you having to change your history around. That being said I have to check something with Becki (the site owner) and I'll get back to you on what needs to be changed about that.

Thirdly. Your character is way too old. Well, not so much that but if you really want a character that old we would like to see a minimum of two paragraphs of history per thousand years. I know that may seem harsh but it's a way to make sure that people who play characters that old really want to play them. If you would like to do that we'll definitely consider it, but I wouldn't start adding more (if that's what you decide) until I get back to you about what needs to be changed in your history.

Regards,
Chelsi

P.S. Other than that things look good, so keep on truckin' peep!

Welcome to Dragonkin

I am Becki the owner, Over all the app ia okay got a few issues as Khelek said

First your screen name needs to be your characters first name, makes posting easier in large threads having one name for each chracters.

Second is his age, if you wish to play an older dragon please make him no older then 3000 years and i would like a detailed description of where he has been for so long.

His power level for his dragon type he is strong but would not have the same power as a dragon lord, of course the lords are considered a myth so he might believe he is stronger then them.

Bring his overall dragon size down a bit, so about 80ft? (still makes him biggest around for now) as the Gold when fully grown will drawf him in size.

Okay onto the history:

I am willing to allow you some creative bounds on the board history but you must stick to the main idea.

I am going to allow your mix breed white/blue but i need to know more of how he was raised, being of such a voilatile mix he would have had great difficulty learning to control water along with ice as he would forever be freezing the water he was trying to control.

The first dragon that was slain by the humans was a Red, they drank of his blood and became Magi, that was just over 1000 years ago. Hence the need to change his age drastically he would already have been well over 5000 before his mother was attacked. If he was a child when this happened why did they not attack him also? I would like to know how he hid.

Some info on his first change as well would be nice, how he got through it and how he adapted afterwards?

This water he meets? I will accepted she doesn't realise she is a dragon but she would not be his age she would be maybe 17-18 as all dragons change at that human age, powers for the Dragon Kin manifest regardless of if the person knows about them, unlike for the Beast Kin who can lose their abilies if they are not used.

I would like some mention of the Slayers as they have been enemies of his people for a long long time.

I know this seems like alot of changes but he seems like an intresting character who could fit in well as a teacher for the younger dragons on the board. Make these changes for me and we should have no issues!!

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