So, what will happen?, After Aang beats the Fire Lord?
kairirose
Posted: Jul 25 2006, 03:34 PM


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Well, this is one of my ideas, I didn't get too fancy, I am just seeing if this story line works, so yes it sucks. smile.gif
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kairirose
Posted: Jul 25 2006, 03:36 PM


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Stars twinkled in the sky, showing that finally the battle was over. The Fire Lord was defeated, and the nations were at peace at last. The group walked on a gravel path, smiling.
“Well, ya’ boneheads, we did it...” Toph smirked
“I guess we did,” Aang looked up at the sky,
“So what is Going to happen now? We have, well nothing to do, Do we?” Sokka Questioned, mainly looking towards Katara,
“ We could always, well, see the world..”
“Oh, So exiting, Haven’t we already done that?” Sokka replied. The group grew silent, and continued walking down the path.
“Well, it is getting late, want to set up camp?”Katara began
“I call the tent,” “I’ll make the fire” “I’ll get food”
“Then, I’ll get some water,” Katara smiled , then began walking to the nearby stream. The air was growing cold, as Katara looked at the stream, she was lost in it’s brilliance. What were they going to do now? Katara had grown found of every one, ut they all had lived in different places, how was the group going to stick together? Katara looked deeper into the stream, seeing the light reflecting differently, looking deeper, she saw a bottle. Katara grabbed it, curiously. Something was inside.....
“Aang, Sokka, Toph, Come over here quick, I think I found Something....” Aang used his staff to fly over to the stream while the others ran.
“It seems like, a message, in a bottle...” Aang muttered.
“Wow Aang, you are a genius!!” Sokka remarked.
Katara pulled the cork out of the neck of the bottle, and slipped out the peace of paper.

Please help me. I am a bender Stuck in a cave, Food is short and I might not make it, please, follow this map, and bring someone that can get me out!! Please Help Me!!!!

“What if it is a trap???” Toph Mutters. “You can’t believe every note left in a stream, I mean if she could slip this here, can’t she get herself out?”
“I dunno Toph, there is a bender out there that needs our help...”
“Well, two things. One, this could be really old, and it Can be to late, Two, what kind of bender would be here in the earth kingdom if they were not an earthbender” Sokka looks at katara and Aang, then chuckles. “I could be wrong though..... heh heh”
“Well, It doesn’t look far from here, Why don’t we check it out tomorrow..”
“Fine” “Sure” “Whatever” The group finish setting up camp, then sleeps.



The Sun rises, Kattara was wide awake, she was not able to sleep, thinking about the day ahead.
“Come on Ya lazy people....Get up Get up Get up!!! Rise and Shine...”Katara yelled. The group woke up, then they started there day, following the map towards the cave.
(Not sure what happens on the way, so I’ll Fill that in later)

The Group arrived to the cave, Looking it over they saw a stream surrounding the entranced, that was now covered in rocks, except for a small hole on the bottom.
“So that is how they slipped the bottle through....”Sokka figured.

“Hello.... Is someone out there?”A voice came from inside the cave.”If So, Please help me” A hand appeared to be reaching out.
“Ok, But what kind of bender are you... You are obviously not a earth bender, So are you a water bender?”Katara questioned.
“No,” The voice answered.
“Ok, Fire?”
“No,”
“Your not a bender are you...”
“I am.....Just let me out, and I’ll show you..”
“Whatever, stand back about five feet..”Toph replied.
“OK”
Toph bended the earth down into the ground, Dust surrounded the cave. A Fast moving breeze cleared the dust. A girl about Aang’s age looked at the group in awe, she smiled. Her blond hair was a couple inches past her shoulders, the girl wore earth nation attire.
“Hi, my name is Miya...”
“So What can you bend?”Toph questioned.
“Wait.... Doesn’t Miya mean something about......Arrows and Temples....Wait,” Aang smiled then ran up to her. “Bison says, Got it.”
“Huh?” Miya replies.
“Just do it, OK , Copy me.” Aang took out his marbles, and spun them in the air. He threw them towards Miya, she caught them, rolled her eyes then spun the marbles in the air.
“Ahha!!!! You are a earthbender...... why where you stuck in a cave if you are a earthbender?????!!!!” Toph yelled.
“I can only bend sand.”
“But, those are rocks??!!!” Sokka shouted.
“Wow, you are sure smart.” Toph smirks.
“Second Round!!!!!!” Aang yells. Aang smiles really big, then twirls his hands to form a air scooter. Aang looks at Miya, who whipped a scooter up faster then Aang. “You know that move is like a hundred years old, try something more challenging.”
“Hello!!! I invented that move....”
“No, That move was created by a kid named Aang about 100 years ago...”
“HELLO??!!!! This is Aang....”
“That is impossible,”
“I was stuck in an iceberg for a hundred years, don’t laugh..”
“What??!! Ha, ha *snort* hahe. How can a person get stuck inside an iceberg???” Toph laughs
“Long story, don’t ask.” Aang replies. “So, Miya, how did you escape???”
------------- Chapter 2 coming soon ---------------

((PS, I looked up the name Miya in Japenese, and it means arrows, trees, and temples))
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kairirose
Posted: Jul 25 2006, 03:38 PM


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(It is mainly like a basic script... very basic, because i heard that the co creator of avatar reads these fanfics on nick.com so If you guys can help me out, that would be great... Thanx)
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PapayaCrazy
Posted: Dec 27 2006, 02:29 PM


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Good Job!!!
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kairirose
Posted: Jan 12 2007, 09:45 AM


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Thnx
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