Hub - January 29, 2008 01:17 PM (GMT)
Chapter 1: Beginnings
Year 200X. Scientist started trying to make programs that could look and act like a human being. One of those scientists was my grand father Tachibana Minami. They all exerted most of their effort trying to make this a reality. After a few years, they accomplished the seemingly impossible task, and they called it Net Navis. Then they made a place where Navis can go. They upgraded the net so that navis can travel and upgraded the computers so that navis can access the net, live there, or protect the computer from viruses. It was a dream come true. Because of this new invention, a crime organization was formed. They were called, Abaddon. To defend the net and the people the scientist created a special police force. They were called, net agents. The Net agents fought against Abaddon for peace in the Net.
Today is Monday, June 14, 200X, and the start of the school year. Kiasuke wakes up and seats up then stretches his arms up high. Another day, another year, and, another adventure it is for him. It’s another year to experience and to enjoy with new friends, new teacher and new rivals.
“Good morning Kiasuke,” a navi greeted him.
His long ponytail hair swayed back and forth. He wore a red padded armor that covers his chest, a red helmet with a green visor and a pair of red boots that covers up until his knees. He is Kiasuke’s net navi and friend.
“Morning Ryu.” Kiasuke replied.
Kiasuke, Ryu’s operator and friend. He had short black hair and dark black eyes. He had fine colored skin. A third year student in Battle City high, he could sometimes act recklessly just to protect his friends and family.
“Did you have a good night sleep Kiasuke?” Ryu asked.
“Yeah, it was great.” Kiasuke replied.
Kiasuke went to the kitchen and made breakfast. He broke two eggs and added some salt, pepper and two tablespoon of water. He beat the eggs and got a pan. He poured a little oil on the pan and turned on the stove. When the pan was hot enough, he poured the eggs. He waited for a few minutes then he flipped the egg. When it was done, he heated up some rice and ate. A few minutes later, he got ready for school. He wore his school uniform which was a black polo shirt and black pants. He grabbed his bag and went outside.
“Ah, what a beautiful morning wouldn’t you say Ryu?” Kiasuke asked.
“Yeah. Oh yeah, when you were asleep I went to the net to check the weather forecast.” Ryu said.
“So, what did it say?” Kiasuke asked.
“They say there won’t be any storms this month.” Ryu replied.
“Really? That’s good news.” Kiasuke said.
Kiasuke walked to school and saw Jun Amakusa. He approached her and greeted her.
“Good morning Jun.” Kiasuke greeted.
“Good morning to you too Kiasuke” Jun replied.
Jun Amakusa, second daughter of Ken Amakusa. As Kiasuke approached her, her long black swayed in the wind brushed up her face. Smiling, she brushed back her hair back with her hand, revealing her dark black eyes. She wore her school uniform which was a black long sleeve polo with a tie inside. She wore a white skirt and knee high socks and black shoes. She’s shy to others except for her friends and family. She’s a nice girl who always thinks about others before herself.
“So, how’s your vacation Jun?” Kiasuke asked.
“It was okay. We went to my grandmother’s summer house just a few days ago.” Jun replied.
“I bet you had a great time.” Kiasuke said.
“How about you? What did you do the whole summer?” Jun asked.
“Nothing much. Went to the arcade, surfed the net, listened to music, and customized Ryu.” Kiasuke replied.
Jun and Kiasuke walked to school together and while walking to school they saw Hiroshi Uchida. They approached him and greeted him.
“Good morning Hiroshi” Kiasuke and Jun greeted.
“Morning.” Hiroshi replied.
Hiroshi is Kiasuke’s friend and rival in net battling. They known each other since elementary. He had short black hair and his eyes are colored black and he had fine skin color. He wore the same uniform as Kiasuke.
“So, how was your vacation, Hiro?” Kiasuke asked.
“Tiring. We went hiking on a tall mountain yesterday.” Hiroshi replied.
“Ouch. You must be really tired Hiro.” Jun reacted.
The three of them went inside the building and went to their own classrooms. Kiasuke is in 3-1, Jun is in 3-2, and Hiroshi is in 3-3. *ding* *dong* *ding* the school bell rang. Kiasuke’s first period was going to start. The teacher entered the room with a girl wearing their school uniform.
“Settle down now class. We have a new student this year. Her name is Sakura Yuki.” The teacher said.
Sakura bowed her head and introduced herself.
“Um…. I’m Sakura, nice to meet you.” Sakura said.
Sakura brushed her long blond hair so that everyone can see. Her eyes were as blue as a gem. Her skin color was a little white.
“Okay Sakura, you can seat there Sakura, beside Kiasuke.” the teacher said.
Sakura walked towards her table and place her things on the table.
“Wow, she’s really pretty.” Kiasuke whispered.
“Hello, I’m Sakura. It’s nice to meet you.” Sakura said.
“Hi, I’m Kiasuke. It’s nice to meet you too.” Kiasuke replied.
Meanwhile, in the cyber world of the classroom…
“Hi I’m Sakura’s net navi, Natsumi. It’s nice to meet you.” Natsumi said.
Natsumi, Sakura’s net navi. She has pink hair and she wore a Chinese outfit.
“I’m Kiasuke’s net navi, Ryu. It’s nice to meet you.” Ryu said.
After school, Kiasuke was on his way home when he saw Sakura in an alley surrounded by gangsters. He then approached them to help Sakura.
“Hey, guys! What do you think your doing?” Kiasuke said with confidence.
“Hey guys, looks like we have a hero here.” One of the gangsters said.
“Do you know what we do to heroes’ kid? We beat them up and leave them to rote in the trash.” Another one said.
They circled around Kiasuke to prevent him from escaping.
“Oh really now. Am I supposed to be scared or something you punks. I bet a rat can take on trash like you.” Kiasuke said.
“Your one though guy aren’t you. Boys get him.” The leader of the gangsters ordered.
Without a minute to spare all four of them attacked Kiasuke. But when they tried to hit Kiasuke he disappeared.
“Hey punks! Are you blind or something? I’m like way over here.” Kiasuke said in a teasing tone.
One of them got pissed off and attacked Kiasuke. He tried to hit him on the face but Kiasuke easily evaded it and countered by kicking him at the stomach.
“One down, four to go.” Kiasuke said.
Another gangster tried to attack him. He tried kicking him at the guts but Kiasuke caught his leg and kicked his other leg and the gangster fell on the floor.
“So, who’s next?” Kiasuke asked
The gang leader started charging at Kiasuke. He tried to hit him at the face but Kiasuke caught his fist. The gang leader use his wooden sword to hit Kiasuke at the face and it hit. Kiasuke’s head bleeded.
“*groan* good punch.” Kiasuke complimented.
Kiasuke got up and attacked the gang leader. The gang leader punched him but Kiasuke grabbed his arm and threw him and he hit the trash cans. The gang leader was knocked out and the other members fled.
“Well, that takes care of that. Hey Sakura, are you alright?” Kiasuke asked.
“I’m fine. Are you?” Sakura asked
“I’m alright, don’t worry.” Kiasuke replied.
Sakura got close to Kiasuke taking a look at his injury. When Sakura got close to him, Kiasuke blushed.
“Hey Sakura, I’m alright don’t worry.” Kiasuke said.
“No you’re not. You just got hit on the head. I’ll accompany you to the hospital.” Sakura said.
“I can go by myself. Don’t worry about me Sakura.” Kiasuke said
“Even though you don’t want me to come I’ll still go.” Sakura said
“Well, I can see there’s no point on arguing with you.” Kiasuke said.
Sakura and Kiasuke went to the hospital so Kiasuke can be treated.
“Hmm. It appears that nothing is wrong. You just have a wound on your head.” The doctor said. “You should be okay in a week or two.”
“Okay, thank you doctor.” Kiasuke said.
Sakura and Kiasuke left the hospital.
“I’m alright Sakura. You can go home.” Kiasuke said.
“Are you sure?” Sakura asked.
“Yeah” Kiasuke replied.
“Alright. I’ll go home now.” Sakura said.
Sakura left Kiasuke and went home.
“Ryu.” Kiasuke called.
“Yes?” Ryu replied.
“Why have you been quiet all this time?” Kiasuke asked.
“That’s because I don’t want to bother the two love birds *giggle*.” Ryu said.
“We’re not love birds!” Kiasuke said angrily.
Kiasuke went home and made dinner. After eating he went upstairs and got ready for bed. A few minutes later he went to bed.
“Good night Ryu.” Kiasuke said.
“Good night Kiasuke.” Ryu said.
Dark Protoman - January 30, 2008 01:12 AM (GMT)
A couple things...
I can see you were trying to use a lot of description, but the kind you used, isn't the right kind. Like, when you were describing that one girl, instead of saying, "She has long black hair and black eyes", you could have said something like...
"As Jun approached Kiasuke, her long, black hair swaying in the wind, brushed up against her face. Smiling, she brushed her hair back with her hand, revealing her dark black eyes."
See what I mean?
Agh! I gotta go! I'll say some more stuff later. Byes!
Hub - January 30, 2008 05:23 AM (GMT)
pls do. and i'm copying your sugestion.
Dark Protoman - January 31, 2008 12:21 AM (GMT)
Okay, I'm back.
The grammar is...not horrible but...who edited this? It's not that good.
The fight could have used A LOT more detail.
In the paragraph where the main character is making his breakfast, try not to use the word "he" too much. Use his name, or something. And do you really need a whole paragraph describing him making breakfast? At least add some more things in there. Like, someones giving him a phone call, or something.
I really can't think of anything else right now...
Hub - January 31, 2008 05:09 AM (GMT)
my brother didn't edited this. he was too busy.
Dark Protoman - January 31, 2008 06:58 PM (GMT)
Maybe you should get him to edit it next time.
akirasinx - February 1, 2008 02:23 PM (GMT)
Hub - February 2, 2008 09:53 AM (GMT)
Tnks. I'll try to upadate it monthly.
Dark Protoman - February 2, 2008 07:47 PM (GMT)
Maybe you should fix the first chapter before you make any new ones.
Hub - February 3, 2008 01:26 AM (GMT)
too late. i started this fic a long time ago and already have 4 chapters. and right now i'm fixing chapter one.
@to all who reads this: can someone help me?
Dark Protoman - February 3, 2008 04:34 AM (GMT)
I hope your other chapters are better than the first.
I already told you the adjustments you should make. I even let you use that one thing I wrote. (you didn't even ask, but okay)
Virtualruler554 - February 24, 2008 05:35 PM (GMT)
Yes that type of description is called Show not Tell. And OMG I can't believe I am talking about grammar mistakes on a Rockman site.
Hub - February 25, 2008 04:29 AM (GMT)
I'll fix that. I'm a little busy at the moment.
RP_player987 - March 1, 2008 04:59 AM (GMT)
OMFG! HUB writes!? Now, thats news for the whole class. But it was good :DP:
Dark Protoman - March 2, 2008 01:12 AM (GMT)
Hub - March 2, 2008 01:27 AM (GMT)
organization13 - March 3, 2008 11:00 AM (GMT)
Hub, your story is not bad
Hub - March 3, 2008 11:40 AM (GMT)
tnks. I'll put up 2 and 3 tommorow.
organization13 - March 6, 2008 09:20 AM (GMT)
so when are you gonna post the next chapter. i have been waiting a day or 2 now
Hub - March 7, 2008 07:28 AM (GMT)
organization13 - March 7, 2008 07:33 AM (GMT)
and whens 10 minutes gonna come?
Hub - March 7, 2008 08:08 AM (GMT)
Now. You happy?
Chapter 2: A new rival
After school, when Kiasuke was about to go home, the guys he beat up yesterday were in front of the school but with another member.
“So, you guys again, and you brought one more guy with you. So, ready for your knuckle sandwiches?” Kiasuke insulted.
“Not this time, kid. We’re here to challenge you in a net battle, and your opponent is our boss.” one of the gangsters said.
A man walked up in front of Kiasuke. He wore a Gakuran over his shoulders and has a leaf in his mouth.
“I’m Kashamaru. So, you’re the one who beaten up my boys.” Kashamaru said.
“Yeah, got a problem?” Kiasuke asked.
“Humph, let’s get into business. Tomorrow at four, meet me at the arcade. We’ll have a net battle, and we’ll both bet our rarest chip.” Kashamaru said.
“Fine by me. I’ll bet my Super Vulcan.” Kiasuke said.
“And I’ll bet my Cross Divide. Meet you in the arcade at four.” Kashamaru said
They both left the area. Kiasuke went back home and got Ryu ready for tomorrow’s battle.
“Are you sure about this Kiasuke?” Ryu asked.
“C’mon, the only who beaten me in a net battle was a net official.” Kiasuke replied.
“True, but have you seen this guy battle? You don’t know what kind of techniques he and his navi are going to use. Plus, you’re betting your most rare chip.” Ryu said
“It’ll be fine.” Kiasuke replied.
“*sigh* guess there’s no point on trying to stop you.” Ryu said.
After customizing Ryu for tomorrow’s battle, Kiasuke went to sleep. The next day, after class, Kiasuke went straight to the arcade to battle Kashamaru.
“Are you ready, Ryu?” Kiasuke asked.
“I was born ready.” Ryu replied.
It was four in the afternoon; Kashamaru arrived and step up at the net battling machine.
“You ready to lose your rare chip?” Kashamaru asked in a teasing tone.
“I think that’s going to be you.” Kiasuke replied.
“Humph, enough small talk. Jack-in Duskman, Transmission.” Kashamaru said while pressing a button on his PET and aiming for the jack-port.
“Jack-in Ryu, Transmission.” Kiasuke said while pressing a button on his PET and aiming for the jack-port.
After jacking-in two navis appeared in the arena.
“I am Duskman. I’m the navi of Miyabi’s son, Kashamaru.” Duskman said.
“Really now. Let’s have a fair fight, okay?” Ryu said
“I’m a ninja, cheating is dishonorable” Duskman replied.
“Fighters read, FIGHT!” The computer said.
“Let’s go!” Kiasuke said in an energetic voice.
“Duskman, don’t hold back.” Kashamaru.
“Battle Chip – Mega Cannon, Dash, Slot-in” Kiasuke said while inserting two chips in his PET.
“Dash! Mega Cannon!” Ryu said.
A bird appeared with a red turret on top. It attacked Duskman with the cannon, but Duskman evaded.
“Battle Chip – Samurai Sword, Area Steal, Slot in.” Kashamaru said while inserting two chips in his PET.
“Samurai Sword! Area Steal!” Duskman said.
Then Duskman’s hand and forearm turned to a katana. Duskman used Area Steal and teleported behind Ryu, and slashed him with his katana.
“Ugh!” Ryu shouted in pain.
“Ryu! Battle Chip – Recovery 300, Slot in” Kiasuke said while inserting a chip in his PET.
‘’You should give up if you want your navi to survive.” Kashamaru said.
“After a luck shot like that? You have to be joking.” Kiasuke said.
Ryu stood up and got ready to fight.
“Ryu.” Kiasuke called.
“Kiasuke, let’s do it.” Ryu said.
“Program Advance.” Kiasuke and Ryu said.
“Battle Chip – Vulcan 3, Triple Slot in.” Kiasuke said while inserting three chips in his PET.
After slotting in the three chips, Ryu right and forearm turned to a Gatling gun with ten barrels.
“Humph, program advance huh? Duskman Beta Sword” Kashamaru said
“Yes, Master.” Duskman replied.
“Program Advance!” Kashamaru said.
“What?!” Kiasuke said.
“Battle Chip – Sword, Wide Sword, Long Sword, triple slot in.” Kashamaru said while inserting three chips in his PET.
Nijaman’s right hand and forearm turned to a sword with a triangular edge. While his left hand and forearm turn to a diamond edge sword. The two swords shined and fused to a more powerful sword.
“Beta Sword!” Duskman shouted while releasing the sword.
Both attacks clashed with great power, it destroyed the terrain leaving only the two fighters.
When both attacks disappeared, they saw Duskman laying on the floor and Jackged out.
“Duskman deleted. Winner Kiasuke and Ryu” the computer announced.
“Humph, that was a great battle Kiasuke. As promise here, my rare chip.” Kashamaru said while giving Kiasuke the chip.
“Thanks.” Kiasuke said.
“Mark my words kid. I’ll get that chip back and when I do, you better be ready.” Kashamaru said.
“If you can beat me that is.” Kiasuke teased.
Both operators left the building. Kiasuke went to his house to find that his father was back.
“Long time no see, Kiasuke.” His father, Furuki, greeted.
Furuki is Kiasuke’s father. He was a great scientist working at Sci Lab.He has short black hair and he wore black eyeglasses. He wore a black tie and yellow long sleeve polo. He wore a pair of grey pants and black shoes.
“Hi dad, how you been?” Kiasuke said
“Good. It’s your birthday today, isn’t it?” Furuki said
“Hey, you remembered.” Kiasuke said.
“Here’s your present.” Furuki said while giving him a CD.
“What’s this?” Kiasuke said
“It’s a navi customizer. We invented how to equip weapons to navis. Here I’ll teach you how to do it.” Furuki said.
They went to Kiasuke’s room. Kiasuke installed the program, and his father thought him how to use the customizer.
“Wow, this is great dad.” Kiasuke complimented
“Of course. I invented it.” Furuki bragged.
Suddenly the door bell rang.
“I’ll get it.” Furuki said.
He went down stairs to open the door.
“Yes? Who are you?” Furuki asked.
“Hello, I’m Sakura, Kiasuke’s classmate. Is he there?” Sakura asked
“Kiasuke! There’s someone looking for you!” Furuki called.
Kiasuke went down and went to the door.
“What is it, Sakura?” Kiasuke asked.
“I forgot to give you your present.” Sakura replied.
“Thank you Sakura. Why don’t you come in for a moment?” Kiasuke said.
“Okay.” Sakura replied.
“Hmm…. Does my eye deceive me or do I see two love birds here?” Furuki teased.
“We’re just friends, dad!” Kiasuke said.
“Sorry, it’s getting late I should go home now.” Sakura said.
“I’ll come with you, Sakura. It’s pretty dark. You might get in danger like last time.” Kiasuke said.
“Yeah, sure. Go with you girlfriend.” Furuki said.
“Oh, zip it Dad.” Kiasuke said.
Kiasuke accompanied Sakura to his house and went back to his house and found his father sleeping.
“Well Kiasuke, it’s pretty late and we still have school tomorrow.” Ryu said
“Yeah I should go to bed.”
Kiasuke got ready to go to sleep and went to bed.
organization13 - March 7, 2008 08:28 AM (GMT)
Hub - March 7, 2008 08:29 AM (GMT)
Shadowman was already taken
organization13 - March 7, 2008 08:45 AM (GMT)
you could use Black Widow, thought that is a spider name. but it sounds cool. atleast better than ninjaman
Hub - March 7, 2008 08:47 AM (GMT)
I need a name that is fit to Shadowman's heir.
organization13 - March 7, 2008 09:00 AM (GMT)
how about DuskMan. it sounds hectic
Hub - March 7, 2008 09:04 AM (GMT)
organization13 - March 7, 2008 09:17 AM (GMT)
see, now it sound better instead of jack in ninjaman. it is now jack in Duskman
Hub - March 7, 2008 09:18 AM (GMT)
organization13 - March 7, 2008 09:23 AM (GMT)
so when are you ever gonna release the next chapter. and also 1 more problem. but forgot to tell but in chapter one. the other dude is the boss and now this dude with ninj*Ahem*DuskMan is the leader.
Hub - March 7, 2008 09:37 AM (GMT)
Yeah I already fixed that. Here's your order of Ryu.EXE Chapter 3. (Bye Org13! Gotta go to the park.)
Chapter 3: Beginning of the War
The next day…
“Morning, Kiasuke.” Ryu greeted.
“Morning, Ryu.” Kiasuke greeted. “Where’s Dad?”
“Maybe he’s down stairs or maybe he left.” Ryu replied.
“Let’s check.” Kiasuke said.
Kiasuke went down while carrying his PET and found his father making breakfast.
“Morning, Kiasuke.” Furuki greeted.
“Morning, Dad.” Kiasuke greeted.
Kiasuke sat down and his father gave him his breakfast.
“Here you go. I made you a Panini.” Furuki said
Kiasuke ate the sandwich.
“Wow! This sandwich is pretty good.” Kiasuke complimented.
“”Of course, I was the one who made it.” Furuki said.
“I’m sorry to bother your happy conversation, but you need to leave now, Kiasuke or you’ll be late.” Ryu said.
“Oh my gosh! It’s already 7:40. Sorry dad I got to go. Bye.” Kiasuke said.
“Sure, I’ll make dinner.” Furuki said.
Kiasuke went to school in a hurry.
“Phew! We made it.” Kiasuke said.
*Ding Dong Ding* the school bell rang and the teacher went in. They started their first period class. After class, Kiasuke went to home.
“Home at last.” Kiasuke said.
“Kiasuke, phone. It’s from Dad.” Ryu said.
Kiasuke picked up his PET and answered the phone.
“Hello?” Kiasuke said.
“Kiasuke, go to Sci Lab right away.” Furuki said.
“Sure, but what for?” Kiasuke asked.
“Somebody hacked into the system. We need your help.” Furuki said.
“I’m on my way.” Kiasuke said.
Kiasuke made his way to Sci Lab via Metroline Station. Metroline station is a train station leading to different places in Electopia. Kiasuke bought a ticket to Sci Lab. A few minutes later he was in front of the building. Sci Lab was a white building with 10 floors. In Sci Lab, they research about how to improve the net society.
“We’re here.” Kiasuke said.
“Kiasuke, let’s go.” Ryu said.
“Right.” Kiasuke said.
Kiasuke made his way to the third floor.
“Jack-in Ryu, Transmission.” Kiasuke said while pressing a button on his PET and aiming at the jack-port.
In an instant Ryu was transported into the door’s cyberworld.
“Kiasuke I’m in.” Ryu said.
“Ryu, unlock the door.” Kiasuke said.
“Right.” Ryu said.
But when Ryu was about to unlock the door a navi appeared.
“Ryuki!?” Ryu said in a surprised tone. You’re the one who hacked the computer? Why?
“That is none of your concerns. If you want to unlock the door you have to defeat me first.” Ryuki said.
“Fine. Kiasuke!” Ryu said.
“Program Advance!” Kiasuke said.
“Program Advance!” Ryu said.
“Battle – Chip Salamander, Fire Sword, Fire Blade, Slot-in.” Kiasuke said while inserting 3 chips in his PET.
“Fire Sword!” Ryu said.
His right hand and forearm turned to a sword and it was enveloped in flame.
“Fire Blade!” Ryu said.
His left hand and forearm turned to a sword shaped like a hook and it was enveloped with flame.
“Salamander!” Ryu said.
When he used salamander he was enveloped in flame. Then the two swords combined. The flame that enveloped Ryu was transferred to the new sword.
“Desperado Bomb!” Ryu said while slashing Ryuki with the sword.
“Using such a strong attack. Program Advance: Beta Sword.” Ryuki said.
Using Beta Sword, Ryuki blocked Ryu’s Desperado Bomb. Both attackes clashed. Both navis were unharmed.
“Well, that didn’t work.” Ryu said.
“Battle Chip – Super Vulcan, Slot-in.” Kiasuke said while inserting a chip in his PET.
“Super Vulcan!” Ryu said.
When Ryu used Super Vulcan his right hand and forearm turned to a Gatling gun with 3 barrels, and has the capacity of shooting 20 bullets in one second.
“Samurai Sword.” Ryuki said.
When Ryuki used Samurai Sword, his right hand and forearm turned to a silver katana.
“Fire!” Ryu said while shooting at Ryuki.
“That won’t work.” Ryuki said.
Ryu kept shooting while Ryuki kept blocking every bullet that came out of Ryu’s weapon.
“Battle Chip – M-Cannon, Slot in.” Kiasuke said.
Cannon then appeared behind Ryuki. It shot Ryuki at the back.
“Back stab, huh? Well, that won’t work either.” Ryuki said.
Ryuki simply dodged the shot by jumping upwards.
“Better delete me in less than ten minutes or your pops won’t last to see the sunset.” Ryuki said.
Ryu stood up.
“Kiasuke, let’s use dad’s gift.” Ryu said.
“Like, we have a choice. NCS, Ryu Gunner, activate!” Kiasuke said.
Ryu shined green and when the light disappeared he turned green with two rocket launchers mounted on his shoulders, his left and right hand and forearm turned to a Vulcan with five barrels that can shoot fifty bullets in one second, and a jet pack mounted on his pack.
“What the?! So, this is Furuki’s new navi system, huh?” Ryuki said.
“Vulcan Barrage!” Ryu said while shooting at Ryuki with his two Vulcans.
The speed of the bullets were too fast that Ryuki was not able to dodge.
“Ugh!” Ryuki shouted in pain.
“Rocket Fire!” Ryu said while releasing his two rockets.
“Rockets, huh? That isn’t going to work.” Ryuki said.
Ryuki dodge the rockets by jumping, but the rockets turned upwards and hit Ryuki.
“Drat, homing.” Ryuki said. “Ugh!”
“Why, Ryuki? You’re a net agent. Why did you try to kill dad?” Ryu asked.
“Cause, your dad isn’t in danger.” Ryuki said.
“What!?” Ryu said.
“Jack-out and enter the room.” Ryuki said.
Ryuki then Jacked-out.
“Ryu, let’s go.” Kisauke said.
Ryu Jacked-out and Kiasuke entered his father’s lab. Inside, there were dozens of expensive high tech computers.
“Okay, so what’s going on?” Kiasuke asked.
“This was all a set up.” Ryuki’s operator Kirisaki said.
“A set up!?” Kiasuke said.
“Yes. It was a test to see if you’re tough enough for the team, and the missions ahead.” Kirisaki said.
“Team? Missions? Can give some detail here?” Kiasuke asked.
“As you know Abaddon is the net mafia that’s trying to destroy all of net society. As we speak, Abaddon is taking over parts of the net. They are expanding their territory and they’re trying to release something that shouldn’t be released.” Kirisaki said.
“And that is?” Kiasuke asked.
“The two god navis of the Undernet.” Kirisaki said.
“The god navis? I heard rumors about the navi gods in the net. As I have heard they’re the hope of the Undernet, but are they real?” Ryu asked.
“Yes, they are. As you know, Sci Lab created the net society. We created the god navis to protect the net society, but a Scientist in the project betrayed the others and inserted bugs in the god navis. The god navis went on a rampage. Took the original program of the navi gods and hid them. Because of the danger of the Undernet, we hid the original program of one of the god navis in there.” Kirisaki replied.
“Looks like a pretty good hiding spot. The Undernet is too dangerous for all navis.” Ryu said
“Yes that’s true but we created a nav that can go into the Undernet. Unfortunately the leader of Abaddon, Serenade, mind controlled that navi.” Kirisaki replied.
“Okay I got the picture. So, where’s the other god navi’s original program?” Kiasuke asked.
“The original program of the other god is in the Underground.” Kirisaki replied.
“Underground?” Kiasuke asked.
“Yes. The Underground is the proto-type net. After creating the net navis, a huge number of bugs fused and became a navi. That navi is Serenade’s net navi, Apocalypse. They’re trying to resurrect the two god navis and destroy the net.” Kirisaki explained.
“So, they’re making their move to destroy the net, right?“ Kiasuke asked.
“Correct, and it is our duty to stop them.” Kirisaki replied “So, are you in or out?”
“I’m in. It won’t be fun without the net anyway.” Kiasuke said.
“Good. Our first mission will start tomorrow. I’ll e-mail you where we will meet.” Kirisaki said.
“Sure.” Kiasuke said.
“Okay now let’s go home, son.” Furuki said.
Both father and son went home. When they were at their house they ate dinner and went to sleep.
The next morning, Kiasuke woke-up and ate breakfast.
“Man, its taking Kirisaki forever to e-mail me.” Kiasuke complained
“Stop complaining. He’ll mail us soon.” Ryu said.
*riiiing* *riiiiiing* *riiiiiiiing* Kiasuke’s PET rang.
“Kiasuke, mail. It’s from Kirisaki. He said that the meeting place is at Beach Area 2 near the entrance leading to the Undernet.” Ryu said.
“Okay, let’s hurry.” Kiasuke said.
Kiasuke went upstairs to his room to Jack-in. He transported Ryu to his computer HP and stepped on a panel that has “Beach Square” on it. He was then transported to Beach square. The Beach Square is where most net navis gather and is also where events in Beach Town are held. Ryu made his way to the rendezvous point.
“We’re here. Now what?” Ryu asked.
“We’re going to enter the Undernet and retrieve the program” Ryuki said.
“Roger. But aren’t there some none net agent navis in the Undernet?” Ryu asked.
“Yes. So, be on your toes.” Ryuki replied.
“Okay let’s go!” Ryu said.
Ryu and Ryuki entered the warp point. They were transported to Hades Island and made their way to the terrifying world of the Undernet.
organization13 - March 7, 2008 09:57 AM (GMT)
Hades island. nice name :DP:
Hub - March 7, 2008 10:58 AM (GMT)
organization13 - March 7, 2008 10:53 PM (GMT)
i remember now, its the island place. but never thought that you will use something from the game to add it to your fan fic
Dark Protoman - March 8, 2008 12:52 AM (GMT)
This fanfic is way too plain. Add a lot more detail. And that first battle...that was WAY too short. And by detail, I don't mean, "He was wearing a black shirt with white letters, and grey pants." <_<
Hub - March 8, 2008 04:00 AM (GMT)
Yeah, I'll fix that OH GREAT ADMINISTRATOR
Dark Protoman - March 8, 2008 04:01 AM (GMT)
You know I'm just trying to help, right?
Hub - March 8, 2008 04:27 AM (GMT)
You do know that I already know that and I'm just acting like my ussual sarcastic self. Go ask RP, he ussually punches me for my crappy sarcasm. :lol:
organization13 - March 16, 2008 07:47 AM (GMT)
so Hub. when is your next chapter gonna be release?