The Jewel Factor

The Crystals were my friend, Spark, idea so i get no credit for them. I decided to make this story because...well...I was bored. Anyways, hope you enjoy the first part.
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The beginning

Chapter 1: The beginning

It was a dark and stormy night in Emerald City. Everything was quiet. Too quiet. Suddenly an alarm went off in the Montana Castle. People in the village could hear it and they all woke up wondering what the problem was. Queen Gem woke up and saw that someone was trying to steal the Crystal that was by her bed. She grabbed a hold of it trying to prevent the guy from stealing it but he got away. He went down the stairs almost getting to the door when the Castle Gaurds stopped him and threw him in the dungeon. They then gave the crystal back to Queen Gem.

"Hm..." She thought. "I need to give this crystal to Kacie so it can be safe from harm."
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Ten thousand years ago, a war was between the four rulers named Angel, Hope, Crazy, Hatred and the one emperor, Dark. He was corupted with darkness and wanted the four rulers to die but they have power that he couldn't match. Until he put an attack to pin down all four rulers which he did. All was going according to his plan but until a hero came got the foru rulers and told them that the only way to stop him was to get into these crystals. They decided that they should. So them all four went into their crystals, the emperor was stopped by the ultimate power these crystals all together had, the Hero gave the crystals to four different families to keep the power alive, and Dark will rise in the next ten thousandth year after he was defeated.

This is..................

JEWEL FACTOR

Note: See the topic called, "Team Jewel" in the fan character section to see the stuff about them if you'd like.

I love the plot to this fan fic

Thanks. When more people reply I will post chapter 2 and 3 because chapter 2 is really really short. ^^;

great fan fic i am eager to see the next chapter

Well I'll post the next two chapters because all it is is just introducing the characters. So here's just 1 and 2.
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Chapter 1 ~ Kacie
7 years ago in Montana Village the Queen and King were having a baby. It was a baby girl and they named her, Kacie. Soon after that Jabor the evil wizard came and broke into their home trying to steal the baby. He killed her mother but her father was able to get away with her in hand. They disappeared in the forest and Jabor never found them. They hid out in a cabin deep in the woods and stayed there. Kacie never knew the whole entire story but she heard some of it. But some of the story she knows is not the truth...


Chapter 2 ~ Rajah

Kacie was going through the woods near her house one day. Just testing out her speed when she saw this huge tree. She gazed up at it with her mouth hanging wide open in amazment! She had never seen a tree so big! She wondered if she'd be able to get up it so she backed up and charged right at the tree going up it and all the way to the top. She had made it up but she also had damaged the tree so bad that it couldn't stand up anymore and fell. It landed on top of someones house. The person came out yelling and screaming at Kacie.

"What in the world?! What did you do to my beautiful home?!! Who the heck are you?!!!!"

"Um..." Kacie said blowing the leaf off of her head. "I'm sorry ma'am. I didn't mean to..."

"What are you doing all the way out here?!!!" she asked.

"I was just playing. I was practicing my running. I'm trying to get supper fast!" Kacie explained. "Um...are you going to tell my dad..."

"...what's your name?"

"Kacie."

"I'm Rajah. I suppose I won't since it was an accident anyways."

"Hehe. Thanks." Kacie said with a tear of sweat coming down from her face.
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Hmm...who's appearence will be next? XD

good i would rate it around 9-10 so far it is great

Cool! Who's appearence do you think will be next out of all of them? XD

the evil guy isn't raja him or somthing

i dont know but its great so far.

i know it is a alsome fan fic simi7 always did make good ones though

Um...no. Rajah isn't evil. And you'll just have to find out.

Thank-you!

Thank-you again Ghost!

ahh then i don't know how is the next xhar to come in lol

Who is it? Who is it? Well here's the next chapter!
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~ Chapter 4: Sissy ~

Kacie was running down the road in Emerald City just having a good old time. She was laaughing as the wind went through her hair and she was humming her favorite song to herself just when suddenly a high pitched scream could be heard close by. She stopped dead in her tracks. She just stood there. Waiting and listening. As if she were a watchdog but a terrified watchdog. She heard the scream again a few minutes later. This time she raced towards it. The scream lead her to a dark alley and as she walked down the pitch black hallway-like street she felt this uneasy preasents nearby as if she was closing in on the devil himself. Kacie then heard voices and peeked around to corner to see what was going on.

"Please." The little girl said terrified. "Please don't..."

"By orders of Dr. Eggman I must eliminate you!" The robot said picking her up as she screamed once more.

"HEY!" Another voice said.

The robot turned around faced the way the voice was heard. "Who are you?" it asked.

"I'm Kacie and I will not let you harm her." she said bravely and putting up her fists.

"Oh really?" The robot said and shot it's lazer beam at her.

She quickly jumped out of the way before it hit her and as she came down she tried kicking the robot. The metal it was made out of hurt her foot so she started to hop around screaming "ow! ow! ow!"

The robot just laughed, "I was created by the evil genius Dr. Eggman. You can't defeat me."

She stood up straight looking at the robot deep in it's metal eyes, smiled and said, "We'll see about that. WIND HAND!"

The wind gathered and formed a hand shape in the sky. It cracked it's knuckles as if it was a real hand.

"GET HIM!" Kacie yelled as the hand went towards the robot and grabbed him. The terrified robot just yelled and screamed telling it to let him go. The little girl fell from the robots grasp and screamed as she fell. Kacie raced over and grabbed her before she hit the ground. "Are you ok?" Kacie asked.

"Yes. I'm fine. Thank-you so much for saving me." the little girl said with teary eyes and an adorible smile. (JUST LIKE CREAM!! )

"Your welcome." Kacie smiled. "My name is Kacie. What's yours?"

"Kacie's a beautiful name." she complimented. "And my name is Sissy. Sissy Smile." p3906957cream.gif

"Sissy? That's a pretty name too." Kacie said as she smiled too.

Sissy opened her eyes still smiling. Then she looked over at the hand and the robot and asked, "Is Mr. Robot going to be ok...?"

"Only if you want him to be."

"Hmm......." Sissy then giggled, "No."

"Then no."

They both laughed and walked off as the hand was dribbling the robot and the robot screaming and yelling as he hit the ground and flew back up in the air to get shot back down again.

I love all three of the chapters.

Thank-you! I'm glad you do.