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!!! Sympathy for the Demon
Devil's Trap
Posted: Nov 19 2006, 10:23 AM


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ok this is another attempted fan fic .. yeah well here we go.

Chapter 1
I heard the sound of the swords clashing together. It made me feel powerful but scared at the same time. I fell to the ground clutching my stomach. As I lay on the floor windeded, the cold concrete against my skin I thought. What wouldn’t I give to lie her forever. To be in a place between sleeping and dreaming. To not think, to not feel.
“Get up .. do not tolerate weakness.”
I got up slowly and looked at the man who had knocked me to the ground. He handed me my sword and held his ready.
“Be ready, when I contract, you expand. When I expand you contract.”
I looked at the man , he was tall and mean looking. He had brown hair and brown eyes that looked almost black. They had no light or warmth. They were just cold and empty.
“Are you ready?” He asked me impatiently.
“I-I .. I got windeded.”
He looked at me in disgust. “Do not let physical pain penetrate you,” he spat at me angrily. “We are a race above such petty things.”
“Maybe you are,” I said equally angry, “but not all of us are as great as you.”
“Emily I am you teacher therefore you will call me sir or master at all times.”
“Yes sir,” I said bitterly.
“Well unfortunately you time is up.”
“Yeah .. unfortunately,” I said sarcastically as I climbed the stairs. I just wanted to get away from my dad and his crazy manic personality. I looked up and saw my sister, my heart sank. She was wearing chunky black boots, tight black pants and a black vinyl corset. She was ready to fight, ready to wreak havoc on human kind.
“Hey how was the training?”
“Well if you count getting told how pathetic and weak you are as training .. I’d say I did really well.
Jess laughed .. I could always make her laugh.
“Jessica get down here instantly!” my dad yelled up at us.
Jess quickly descended and I exited the basement.

My house looked like the perfect suburban apple pie life. It was always tidy with a neat little garden.
I closed the basement door and slid the bookshelf back into place .. I looked at it. You couldn’t tell there was a door concealed behind it.
I glanced at my fathers books. Satanic Rituals from the 1600’s, Diving into the power of telepathy and A demons guide to killing: quick and painless or slow and horrific, were just some to name a few.
I caught my reflection in a mirror. I had blue eyes and blond hair just like my sisters. My pale complexion looked scared and emotionally drained. I couldn’t take it anymore. The training, the pressure, watching my own mother bursting into flames before my very eyes. I just couldn’t take it.


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Posted: Nov 19 2006, 10:34 AM


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Aww that's really good smile.gif POST MORE!!


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Everyone's a let down it just depends on how far down they can go
In every circle of friends there's a whore the one who flirts and does a little more
But who's to say? This is a social scene anyway
And everybody wants to explore the new girl
Caught up in her own hard liquor world
But liquor doesn't exist in my world

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Miss J.
Posted: Nov 20 2006, 06:13 AM


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OMG! Em! You're writting puts mine to shame, seriously that was awesome as! shriek.gif MORE MORE! boxing.gif
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Devil's Trap
Posted: Nov 21 2006, 08:36 AM


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Your a heaps good writer mj .. dont make me shake ur curtains! evil.gif ok i changed the title of this Fan Fic to Sympathy for the Demon. and if u dont like it too bad! and i also moved this to sowa coz its like part of sowa sorta

Chapter 2
That night we had one of our usual parties we have for jess so dad can gloat about how much better than me she is.
"She has so much natural talent and skill," my father said for about the six hundreth time.
I rolled my eyes but he spotted me.
"Just because your jealous your not as good as jess, doesnt mean you have to act so childish."
"Righto," i said becuase agreeing with my father was easier than aguring.
I tried to ignore my father by grabing another taco but it is hard to be distracted the way he rants and raves.
"-All my fathers father and me have been noble and now Jessica is followin in my footsteps, im so proud! She lights up the room."
"Literally," jess said lighting fire to the wood in the fireplace.
I pretended to be vomiting into my taco.
"Emily maybe you should try once in a while," my dad said annoyed.
"Whatever Treaver."
It was that i didnt try .. i did .. i just couldnt create fire like jess and my dad could. My dad once made me look at a candel for like 2 hours once but nothing. I just accepted the fact i couldnt and i was thankful for that.
"And this is my other daughter emily," my dad said introducing me to some random. "She isnt exactly in Jessica's lead talent wise but she is good with weapons."
I choked on my drink when my dad said this, boosting about me was defiantly a first for him.
"Weapons hey?" The man said eyeing me.
"Uhh yeah, throwing knives, death stares," i said, this dude was scary. "Nunchucks are my specialty."
"Sound like you got a hunter here not a demon."
Now it was my dads turn to choke on his drink. "Hunter, no no, she's no hunter," my dad said trying to joke.
"Indeed," the man said coldly.
"Who the hell was that," I asked as he walked away. "I thought you were a race above such things as sucking up?"
"That was someone very important emily. Now get to bed before someone else mistakes you for a hunter."

I walked away from my dad and saw jess chatting non-stop to her boyfriend Brenden. I chuckled to myself when i saw at lest 5 other guys eyeing her hopefully, i couldnt help hearing some of the converstation of the 3 people next to me.
"Burning them on the ceiling, its a nice style."
I Looked around and saw the man my dad had introduced me to being praised by two other men. The man smiled, but the smile did not reach his eyes which remainded cold. His gaze left the two men and landed on me and gave me a look as if to say "naughty naughty you got caughty" somehow he knew i had been listening to his conversation. He headed over to me and i ducked into the hall, but he had followed.
"Listening in on peoples converstations, risky," he said to me smirking. This dude was freaking me out. "Risk taking is a good quality to have."
"Thanks for the flattery, but i dont need it .. and im not gonna suck up to you like my father coz i dont give a dam who you are or how important you are."
"Honest too."
"Evs," i said and i headed for the stairs."

ok yeah its rambly but next chapter things start geting interesting.


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Miss J.
Posted: Nov 21 2006, 09:49 AM


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Well hurry up and post it then!!!!! shriek.gif tongue.gif
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Posted: Nov 22 2006, 07:26 AM


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it's awesome, more shriek.gif


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Everyone's a let down it just depends on how far down they can go
In every circle of friends there's a whore the one who flirts and does a little more
But who's to say? This is a social scene anyway
And everybody wants to explore the new girl
Caught up in her own hard liquor world
But liquor doesn't exist in my world

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Devil's Trap
Posted: Dec 16 2006, 02:57 AM


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"Isn't Brenden the best Emily?"
It was the day after the party. Me and Jess were outside sun baking by the pool. It was our day off from training and Jess loved catching me up on all the goss.
"He acts really tough and mean on the outside but he really is a real softy."
I rolled my eyes. Listening to Jess ramble on about her boyfriend wasn't the most riverting thing in the world.
"And what is this music? EW!" she said changing the station on the radio.
"Hey i like Alexisonfire."
"If i caught on fire I'd burn you to death with me," Jess sang along to the wingey voices of the band.
"I can't take this sh!t are u serious?" I exasperated.
I grabbed the radio and changed it back to Alexisonfire.
"Hey!" Jess yelled making a move for the radio but i held it away from her and stood up. "Em no fair give back the radio!"
Jess tried to snatch the radio from me but i held her away from it.
"What are u gonna do. Huh? PUNK!?" I said teasing Jess as she made furious snatches at the raido.
"Em give it back .. i'll tell dad!"
"Oh is little bitty baby Jessie running to daddy now. Afraid of big bad Em?"
Jess lunged at me but i side-stepped her and she fell into the pool.
"Yes i Won, I won, I won!" I chanted lifting the tiny raido above my head.
"Oh my god girlfriend Im SO! cold!" Jess said resurfacing.
"Whoever said winners weren't grinners lied!" I said doing some kind of war/victory dance on the spot.
"Alright, alright you can listen to ur music .. just help me out of here."
"No way hosé!" I said back away from the pool. "You'll pull me in too."
"Would i ever do a thing like that em?" Jess said doing the shifty eyes shifty.gif "Come on em-"
Jess's words were drowned out by a loud bang that echoed around the backyard. I looked down at the pot plant beside me to see it shatter and dirt fall from it. I looked at Jess who stared back at me stunned, then the whole backyard exploded into a battlefield. Bullets were being fired non-stop at me. I dropped the radio and dive rolled behind a tree and out of site.

I could hear Jess screaming. Poor young innocent Jess, she wasnt ready for fighting like this, well more ready for a ambush in our own backyard.
"JESS DO SOMETHING!" I bellowed from behind my tree, but Jess either wouldn't do anything or couldn't.
Dark clouds begain to form as bullets stopped hitting the tree i was behind. I heard two people pouring something onto the ground behind me. I chanced a look around the tree and a elbow made contact with my face. I could taste the blood in my mouth as i tried to see who had hit me. My eyes focused and i saw a man infront of me wearing a black balaclava. I could see he's yellow teeth baring at me. I tried to move towards him but found i was stuck. I looked down and saw a ring of salt circling me and my tree. While i had been hit, another man in a black balaclava had poured salt around me.
The two men left me at my tree and i glanced at what was happening to jess. I felt sick, it had started raining on Jess who was lying next to the pool no moving, with obvious black burns on her skin.
"Holy water those bastards," i thought to myself.
There was a 3rd guy in the same balaclava as the other two. He bent down next to jess and picked up her limp body.
"How dare he touch my sister with his unworthy hands," I though furiously.
It happened in a spilt second, when my anger had surged through me a huge light had come down from the sky and hit the man holding jess. He was thrown into the air and landed in the pool dead.
I tried to catch my breath, the huge bolt of lightening that had killed the man might have killed jess aswel.
The two men who were left now split up, one ran towards jess and picked her up and jumped the fence and ran out of site. The second one had came running up to me withdrawing a gun.
"You killed my friend," he said raising the gun at my head.
Now i was really confused .. how was his friends death my fault? He got stuck by lightening. Its uncommon, yes, but not impossible.
"You killed my sister!"I spat furiously at the man. I didnt care i was about to die, all i cared about was Jess.
"She isn't dean, but you are."
It was raining hard now. I closed my eyes. This was it, i was going to die in a circle of salt. Die wearing pink aviaters and my swimmers.


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Posted: Dec 16 2006, 05:21 AM


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You updated! A million brownie points for you!

Awesome stuff, write more! Or else...*dun dun dun*


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Devil's Trap
Posted: Dec 16 2006, 06:23 AM


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haha i will .. and what are brownie points? wacko.gif


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Posted: Dec 16 2006, 06:33 AM


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Aww awesome smile.gif post more soon.


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Everyone's a let down it just depends on how far down they can go
In every circle of friends there's a whore the one who flirts and does a little more
But who's to say? This is a social scene anyway
And everybody wants to explore the new girl
Caught up in her own hard liquor world
But liquor doesn't exist in my world

^
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Posted: Dec 16 2006, 07:56 AM


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QUOTE (Devil's Trap @ Dec 16 2006, 05:23 PM)
haha i will .. and what are brownie points? wacko.gif

Brownie points are fictional points that mean nothing and pretty much worthless.

Back on topic - you have to update soon!


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Posted: Dec 16 2006, 11:07 AM


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Oh em that's so good! You're an awesome writer girl!

And.... POST MORE SOON! shriek.gif
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Devil's Trap
Posted: Dec 16 2006, 12:19 PM


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QUOTE
QUOTE (Devil's Trap @ Dec 16 2006, 05:23 PM)
haha i will .. and what are brownie points? wacko.gif

Brownie points are fictional points that mean nothing and pretty much worthless.

Back on topic - you have to update soon!


^^why even mention it then u weird kid.

haha thanks mj .. im not that good bangin.gif

I wait for the shot to come .. but it doesnt. I can hear a choking and spluttering. I open my eyes and look down .. blood is pouring from the guys mouth as i look down at his stomach. Someone has driven a sword through him. I back away as much as i can, the sword is pulled out of him and he drops to his knees and then falls down dead. I look up, terrifed, my dad was holding a huge sword covered in blood. He is looking scary, i have never ever seen anyone look that scary. His face is twisted into a vindictive smile and his eyes are completely black. I was looking at a demon showing its true colours.
"Da-dad?" I asked timidly.
He looked coldly at me and then bent down and wiped away the salt so i could leave my trap.
"Go to your room!"
"But-" I started say.
"Go to your room." My dad said scarying me even more, but i had to tell. I had to make him understand.
"Jess, they to-"
"GO!" my dad said cuting me off again.

Half an hour later i was still pacing around my room. Doing something helped calm me. What was happening to jess? I have to find her. Oh god what if she's de-? No! i couldnt think like that .. if jess was dead they wouldn't have taken her.
I looked around as my door opened, my dad enter and sat down on a chair.
"We need to have a talk," he said calmly staring at me.
"Your dam right we do!" I said angrily "They took Jess and you don't even give a sh!t!"
"Dont tell me how i feel!" Dad said furiously, but i couldn't really care less atm.
"As if you even feel anything!"
"Your right i don't," he replied smirking.
"Tell me something i don't know."
"Well i can tell you that i'm not going to be looking for Jess."
"Excuse me," I said disbelieving. "Your not gonna look for her? Your just going to let her die!"
"Yeah pretty much."
I stood dumbfounded. Who was this guy? What kind of father was he? He didnt even care that some crazies had Jess.
"Your our father, and your going to just abandon Jess?"
"I'm not your father! I'm a demon and i only had you two for the purpose of continuing my legacy."
"You evil son of a B*tch," I said shaking with rage.
"Oh that hurts emily," he said joking(which made me angrier). "Well go and find Jess if you need her so much."
I didn't answer and my dad knew why too. How was i supposed to find Jess? I didnt have any supernatural way to do it.
"Well you could always just think of jess and teleport to her, but that takes quite a bit of power to do. Something which you lack."
"I might not be able to teleport, but i swear on my life that i am going to find jess," I said strongly, "and when I do me and her are gonna be coming after you."
"Oh no! Not big bad emily and jess. Look i'm shaking in my little demon boots."
I ignored my dad and walked out of my room and down the stairs. I was so angry i kicked open the front door and walked down the garden path and away from my old life.

I had been walking for two hours and had no idea were i was. All i knew was i was in Miami, with no clothes, no weapons, no money and no phone. I sat down defeated on the sidewalk. I could hear the stero blaring from a nearby house. How the hell was i going to find Jess? What were the doing to her? Thoughts like this chased each other around in my head. For the first time in my life i was alone. There was no one to protect me now. No comforting whisper in the dark.

so our open wounds will bleed,
until our veins run dry.
now we have to take this thorn,
and tear it from our side.
agitated at the fault line,
still agree to disagree.
you're connected to the heart,
but tonight will set you F r e e


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Posted: Dec 17 2006, 02:03 AM


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Noice! Very noice emmy - pemmy tongue.gif
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Posted: Dec 17 2006, 02:46 AM


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AWESOME!! biggrin.gif

Poor Jess .. and I love that song :]


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Everyone's a let down it just depends on how far down they can go
In every circle of friends there's a whore the one who flirts and does a little more
But who's to say? This is a social scene anyway
And everybody wants to explore the new girl
Caught up in her own hard liquor world
But liquor doesn't exist in my world

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